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Walking on the elements

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Poeminister
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Walking on the elements

You sway and throw the winds away
and you cry and put the inferno at bay
I see your art that could hide a world
and I see your thunder being hurled
You're by an unfound nature I sense
You're walking on the elements

Your eyes sparkle and hide the night
and you wink to just make things feel right
I see you swimming across the heavens
and I feel you breathing about the ocean
You're by an unfound nature I sense
You're walking on the elements

You flip a coin just to decide a path
and you gaze beyond all the fuss and math
your words do silence all battles and war
Your love heals all wounds and sores
You're by an unfound nature I sense
You're walking on the elements


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Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
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Hi Poeminister,

I really like this poem, but at this moment I am at a loss for words, so I will get back to you latter.

Thank you,  Cerenity
Denise
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Great poem, I especially like the repetition of the last lines in each verse. Well done!

Denise
 
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