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To be swept away

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tulip
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0 posted 03-03-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip


To be swept away
on clouds above
to look below
as if a dove.

The place well known
and fitting close.
The feelings strong
and simply shown.

Can it be true
to be as one?
To know for sure
it's not in fun?

To have a look
into my heart,
and know at once
it's just the start.


© Copyright 2000 tulip - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-03-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Tulip!  

Denise
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 03-03-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tulip~
This is really nice.
Your feelings show beautifully.
~*Marge*~


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mete out
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3 posted 03-03-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***Tulip
I love your work and this poem is one of my favourites...

YOUR DAY WILL COME!      


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
kitkat
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4 posted 03-03-2000 11:24 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Liked your poem. Nothing like feelings from the heart
Dark Angel
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5 posted 03-03-2000 03:42 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Absolutley lovely  tulip! Well Done!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


tulip
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6 posted 03-04-2000 05:03 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Denise & Marge,
Thank you...it means alot coming from both of you.
Mete,
It's nice to hear you love my work...thank you.  I'm glad somebody enjoys it, it makes it worth it to write!
Kitkat,
If only my feelings could exist in reality instead of only wishing!!!
Dark Angel,
Thank you!!!
Michael
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7 posted 03-04-2000 05:14 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

tulip, I think for anything to exist in reality it has to be wished for first.  Give your feelings the chance, you'll never know otherwise.


Michael


good poem, btw
Nurse Crachet
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8 posted 03-04-2000 07:10 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

This is beautiful.
tulip
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9 posted 03-04-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Michael,
You're right!  Thank you.
Nurse,
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
nona
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10 posted 03-04-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for nona   Email nona   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nona

Beautiful statement of your feelings keep dreaming & they will come to you.Keep writing & expressing your thoughts.
HelmutB
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11 posted 03-04-2000 08:01 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

This is very nice and sweet
Love it

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Meadowmuse
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12 posted 03-05-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Definitely a poem written from your heart...a lovely and tender expression. Keep writing!

~ Claire
Parker
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Tulip, To wish is but to dream, and to dream is that first step.... really loved the poem

Parker
Corinne
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14 posted 03-05-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

The place well known
and fitting close.
The feelings strong
and simply shown -

wonderful verse!

Loved this poem!

Corinne
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15 posted 03-07-2000 01:54 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!  To find it is the key....
 
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