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To be swept away |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
To be swept away on clouds above to look below as if a dove. The place well known and fitting close. The feelings strong and simply shown. Can it be true to be as one? To know for sure it's not in fun? To have a look into my heart, and know at once it's just the start. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, Tulip!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tulip~ This is really nice. Your feelings show beautifully. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***Tulip I love your work and this poem is one of my favourites... YOUR DAY WILL COME!  I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Liked your poem. Nothing like feelings from the heart |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutley lovely tulip! Well Done! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Denise & Marge, Thank you...it means alot coming from both of you. Mete, It's nice to hear you love my work...thank you. I'm glad somebody enjoys it, it makes it worth it to write! Kitkat, If only my feelings could exist in reality instead of only wishing!!! Dark Angel, Thank you!!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
tulip, I think for anything to exist in reality it has to be wished for first. Give your feelings the chance, you'll never know otherwise. Michael good poem, btw |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
This is beautiful. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Michael, You're right! Thank you. Nurse, I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Beautiful statement of your feelings keep dreaming & they will come to you.Keep writing & expressing your thoughts. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
This is very nice and sweet Love it The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Definitely a poem written from your heart...a lovely and tender expression. Keep writing! ~ Claire |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Tulip, To wish is but to dream, and to dream is that first step.... really loved the poem Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
The place well known and fitting close. The feelings strong and simply shown - wonderful verse! Loved this poem! Corinne |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! To find it is the key.... |
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