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bsquirrel
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0 posted 03-02-2000 11:54 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bsquirrel

-emoticons-
You seem interesting, lol.

Do you mind if I destroy you
As I've been slowly destroying myself?
Robotic communication,
One and zero love.

I can wipe the fingerprints off my past.
Hear the clack of the plastic keys lose hurt?
You'll love what remains of me;
At least please love the idea.

Are we spiritually empty,
Transmuting our souls through a screen?
Friendships of shy people,
A million lonely rooms.

Look at my digital image.
Did I doctor it so I could score?
Of course not. No, of course not, lol!
But can I still call you my whore?

rotflmaoimhobrb.
Are you rolling on the floor, BandAid21?
Approaching happy at all, Hysteria6?
Desperation is the edge of feeling lost and sick.

Maybe we'll find our personal gods
In the late nite arms of one another.
If only life could be small talk and lines of chalk,
Hopscotch stones and jaunty walks.

Please don't make me turn myself off.
I want to see what we can make of our need.
Tell me everything you want;
Remember, neither of us can bleed.

You seem so interesting, lol.
How far do you want to go?
OH STOP IT SILLY!!!!
Your so silly, you know! : )

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1 posted 03-03-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very creative, I enjoyed this!!

Denise
serenity blaze
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2 posted 03-03-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

ouch.  Squirrels bite.  dripping with sarcasm, fun and good wit ( i would hope )

"you SEEM very interesting...?"  Nope.
You ARE very interesting.  LOL
bsquirrel
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3 posted 03-03-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Denise,
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed. (emoticon to follow:   )

serenity,
What can I say? The title of the e-mail you sent me intrigued me. That's almost always how I write: I find a very revealing little snippet of speech, and go off on it. Oh, and the way, I'll reply to your e-mail soon.

Mike
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4 posted 03-03-2000 09:08 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

this is incredible...it amazes me how you take what's inside of me and write it down with such incredible images....you have a gift my friend...I think this one is my favorite...well...lol one of my favorites...love them all  
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5 posted 03-04-2000 02:21 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Corazon,
Careful, you're making me smile an inordinate amount tonight. Oh, the torment of existence.  

Mike
 
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