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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2000-03-02 11:54 PM


-emoticons-
You seem interesting, lol.

Do you mind if I destroy you
As I've been slowly destroying myself?
Robotic communication,
One and zero love.

I can wipe the fingerprints off my past.
Hear the clack of the plastic keys lose hurt?
You'll love what remains of me;
At least please love the idea.

Are we spiritually empty,
Transmuting our souls through a screen?
Friendships of shy people,
A million lonely rooms.

Look at my digital image.
Did I doctor it so I could score?
Of course not. No, of course not, lol!
But can I still call you my whore?

rotflmaoimhobrb.
Are you rolling on the floor, BandAid21?
Approaching happy at all, Hysteria6?
Desperation is the edge of feeling lost and sick.

Maybe we'll find our personal gods
In the late nite arms of one another.
If only life could be small talk and lines of chalk,
Hopscotch stones and jaunty walks.

Please don't make me turn myself off.
I want to see what we can make of our need.
Tell me everything you want;
Remember, neither of us can bleed.

You seem so interesting, lol.
How far do you want to go?
OH STOP IT SILLY!!!!
Your so silly, you know! : )


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-03 12:32 PM


Very creative, I enjoyed this!!

Denise

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2000-03-03 12:40 PM


ouch.  Squirrels bite.  dripping with sarcasm, fun and good wit ( i would hope )

"you SEEM very interesting...?"  Nope.
You ARE very interesting.  LOL

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2000-03-03 01:50 AM


Denise,
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed. (emoticon to follow:   )

serenity,
What can I say? The title of the e-mail you sent me intrigued me. That's almost always how I write: I find a very revealing little snippet of speech, and go off on it. Oh, and the way, I'll reply to your e-mail soon.

Mike

Corazon
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4 posted 2000-03-03 09:08 AM


this is incredible...it amazes me how you take what's inside of me and write it down with such incredible images....you have a gift my friend...I think this one is my favorite...well...lol one of my favorites...love them all  
bsquirrel
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5 posted 2000-03-04 02:21 AM


Corazon,
Careful, you're making me smile an inordinate amount tonight. Oh, the torment of existence.  

Mike

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