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The paths of life

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Seymour Tabin
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       The paths of life

The paths of life ever bend,
Some are short, some never end.
Each one is a show and tell,
Each one has a wishing well.

Some are full of joy and light,
Some pass through the gloom of night.
Some titillate the edge of dreams,
Some are made of dogma beams.

They all ring a bell of chime,
They all last a given time.
All will open and close a door,
All will enter forevermore.

The paths of life ever bend,
Some are short, some never end.
Each one is a show and tell,
Each one has a wishing well.

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Compgirl
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1 posted 03-02-2000 11:06 PM       View Profile for Compgirl   Email Compgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Compgirl

wow..nice..i like every word.. )
WhtDove
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Sey I love it! Every verse, it just jumped off the page!

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One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
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3 posted 03-02-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
I JUST LOVE SHOW AND TELL.
Life's no mystery ...
seen through your eyes.
Bending into life ...
I like the very idea.
Love ya' ~*Marge*~


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Denise
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4 posted 03-02-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem, Seymour! You do have a way of getting to the point of life in your writings!  

Denise
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Hi Seymour Tabin,

This was great, I love the repeat lines, A great way to look at life good or bad.

Thanks,  Cerenity
Elizabeth Santos
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This is just beautiful, Sy
A glimpse of life in poetry
You make it sound like music
Love ya
Liz
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When, as a young girl, I would chance to sketch a scene, it was always of a road, and a wishing well.  Now you've given me the words to put the with the picture.  Thank you Sy.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Seymour Tabin
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Campgirl, Thank you so much for the WOW.

WhtDove, Such a nice comment, thank you. *L*

Marge, Love ya too. Sy

Denise, Thank you sweet Denise. *L*

Cerenity, You welcome and thank you for the beautiful comment.

Elizabeth, It is a kind of music, a beautiful thought from a beautiful mind. Love ya, Sy

Sunshine, a wonderful comment from a wonderful person. *L*
Meadowmuse
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I always admire the simplicity in many of your poems, Seymour. This one is simply beautiful.

~ Claire
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"some titillate the edge of dreams"   I like it
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 03-04-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Meadow, It's what I strive for but often done accomplish. Thank you.

Passing, A titilating comment. Thank you
 
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