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The paths of life
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The paths of life |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The paths of life The paths of life ever bend, Some are short, some never end. Each one is a show and tell, Each one has a wishing well. Some are full of joy and light, Some pass through the gloom of night. Some titillate the edge of dreams, Some are made of dogma beams. They all ring a bell of chime, They all last a given time. All will open and close a door, All will enter forevermore. The paths of life ever bend, Some are short, some never end. Each one is a show and tell, Each one has a wishing well. |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
wow..nice..i like every word..  ) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sey I love it! Every verse, it just jumped off the page! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I JUST LOVE SHOW AND TELL. Life's no mystery ... seen through your eyes. Bending into life ... I like the very idea. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Seymour! You do have a way of getting to the point of life in your writings!  Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Seymour Tabin, This was great, I love the repeat lines, A great way to look at life good or bad. Thanks, Cerenity |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is just beautiful, Sy A glimpse of life in poetry You make it sound like music Love ya Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When, as a young girl, I would chance to sketch a scene, it was always of a road, and a wishing well. Now you've given me the words to put the with the picture. Thank you Sy. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Campgirl, Thank you so much for the WOW. WhtDove, Such a nice comment, thank you. *L* Marge, Love ya too. Sy Denise, Thank you sweet Denise. *L* Cerenity, You welcome and thank you for the beautiful comment. Elizabeth, It is a kind of music, a beautiful thought from a beautiful mind. Love ya, Sy Sunshine, a wonderful comment from a wonderful person. *L* |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I always admire the simplicity in many of your poems, Seymour. This one is simply beautiful. ~ Claire |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"some titillate the edge of dreams" I like it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meadow, It's what I strive for but often done accomplish. Thank you. Passing, A titilating comment. Thank you |
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