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Compgirl
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0 posted 03-02-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Compgirl   Email Compgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Compgirl

The sun is shinning and the rain is warm
no lightning nor thunder from the storm
Purity, so gentle, so  sweet
free as a bird, lite as the feather at my feet.

My heart nor mind is heavy
my soul rest easily in the air.
Rain pouring down my face, heaven above
knowing each drop is from my fathers love.

As the river flows and the birds that sing
I treasure all these little things.
When your day gets hectic and you seem to frown
remember the warm rain that sprinkles  down.

© Copyright 2000 Patty Lynn - All Rights Reserved
lucky
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1 posted 03-02-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Nice

very nice sentiments, I
love Daddy's tears and his arm too.
which is why...
I crawl back into Daddy's arms
and start all over again
it's the only place this o'l heart can mend.
That o'l devil tries to break my heart and tell me I'm no good,
but instead of givin' up like ya thought that I would...

I crawled back into Daddy's arms and started all over again.


[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 03-02-2000).]
devina
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2 posted 03-02-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Anything to do with the rain captures my attention dearie...and you've definantly captured the essense of rain with this one!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Compgirl
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3 posted 03-02-2000 11:32 PM       View Profile for Compgirl   Email Compgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Compgirl

Thank you both!!
Cerenity
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4 posted 03-03-2000 09:07 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Compgirl,

Yes it is very hard to remember the advise
in your poem when things are so though, But I know that its true.

Thank you for the read,

Cerenity
Danny Holloway
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5 posted 03-03-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Very nice poem.  We often forget that it is sometimes the simpler things that mean the most.  Your poem is a nice reminder.
Denise
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6 posted 03-03-2000 04:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is a very comforting poem! Well done!

Denise
Honeybee
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7 posted 03-03-2000 04:36 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

Compgirl:

     You have described a simple pleasure such as rain so perfectly!    I really enjoyed this piece!  I look forward to more poetry by you.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
Compgirl
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8 posted 03-03-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for Compgirl   Email Compgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Compgirl

Thank you all for your replys. I am very glad you enjoyed it. I love the rain and the felling that it brings me. Thank you!!
Michael
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9 posted 03-03-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I have always found the rain to be a cleansing of sorts.  Always relieves any stress or anxiety I may be feeling.  A lovely poem, compgirl.


michael
 
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