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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
The sun is shinning and the rain is warm no lightning nor thunder from the storm Purity, so gentle, so sweet free as a bird, lite as the feather at my feet. My heart nor mind is heavy my soul rest easily in the air. Rain pouring down my face, heaven above knowing each drop is from my fathers love. As the river flows and the birds that sing I treasure all these little things. When your day gets hectic and you seem to frown remember the warm rain that sprinkles down. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Nice very nice sentiments, I love Daddy's tears and his arm too. which is why... I crawl back into Daddy's arms and start all over again it's the only place this o'l heart can mend. That o'l devil tries to break my heart and tell me I'm no good, but instead of givin' up like ya thought that I would... I crawled back into Daddy's arms and started all over again. [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Anything to do with the rain captures my attention dearie...and you've definantly captured the essense of rain with this one!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
Thank you both!! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Compgirl, Yes it is very hard to remember the advise in your poem when things are so though, But I know that its true. Thank you for the read, Cerenity |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Very nice poem. We often forget that it is sometimes the simpler things that mean the most. Your poem is a nice reminder. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a very comforting poem! Well done! Denise |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Compgirl: You have described a simple pleasure such as rain so perfectly!  I really enjoyed this piece! I look forward to more poetry by you.Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
Thank you all for your replys. I am very glad you enjoyed it. I love the rain and the felling that it brings me. Thank you!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I have always found the rain to be a cleansing of sorts. Always relieves any stress or anxiety I may be feeling. A lovely poem, compgirl. michael |
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