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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Time Capsules Yesterday, the sky alert for seagulls made a backdrop. I did not question colors. Now, the breeze curls torn pieces of poem and tosses them. I question the composition. Tomorrow, flirts with my ambiguous mirror winking one mischievous eye. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Tomorrow winking a mischievous eye"... Cute - I like it...  |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
The strom before the calm or the calm before the strom. I'm not sure. But I like it. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Delightful. *L* |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Are you "tomorrow" winking..? I think you better give up some of those alcohol spirits or tell me just where are you getting those capsules...LOL, and when you mentioned "backdrop" I thought of ba-ba-bird dung and of all things you then seemed unconcerned about color. Nice...nice...very nice. All our best...martie |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Martie! I enjoyed this!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~  This poem is so YOU ! I just love it. Lovely - Lovely - Lovely ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
You have such a unique style! The end of each stanza has such meticulous meaning. I love this. Beautiful! |
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