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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-03-02 08:04 PM


Would I Love You Just As Much ?
~*Marge Tindal*~

I've often thought about it
Would I love you just as much
if we had never met
if we had never touched

If we had never kissed
if we never had made love
would I love you just as much
as the stars that shine above

Would I continue to want you
hungering for your touch
Would I still need your loving
Would I love you just as much

It's written in the stars
you're mine forevermore
Would I love you just as much
No
~
~
I'd love you
even more


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
HelmutB
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1 posted 2000-03-02 08:40 PM


I do not need to imagine
I can see it right here
Your poem speaks words so laudly
A love you should not fear
Deep feeling I can clearly see
Such a nice piece of poetry
Love

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 2000-03-02 09:25 PM


This is beautiful, tugs right on the heart strings.
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2000-03-02 09:28 PM


Lovely reading, and a kiss at the end
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2000-03-02 10:31 PM


Marge,
This has a deep meaning in truth and you said
it well. *L*

devina
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5 posted 2000-03-02 10:49 PM


Fate always has a way of stepping in, and you've got in all right here!!!

Very well said dearie!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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6 posted 2000-03-02 10:57 PM


This is beautiful, Marge, and so true. We all have one person that we love with all our heart. Sometimes we never have the opportunity to meet them but we don't love them any less.....well written
WhtDove
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7 posted 2000-03-02 11:12 PM


Beautiful Marge!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-03-02 11:13 PM


HelmutB~
You are just the best !
Love you.

Nurse C~
Thank you ...
tugging at heartstrings is what
love does best, isn't it?

Elizabeth, my friend~
Kisses say it best !  Love you.

Seymour~
It's as deep as it gets.  Love you.

Devina~
You are so special to this lady's heart.
Love you.

Balladeer~
We meet in love !
Love you lots.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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9 posted 2000-03-02 11:17 PM


Simply beuatiful, Marge, as always!  

Denise

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10 posted 2000-03-02 11:24 PM


Little WhiteDove~
You squeaked in while I was posting.
Thank you, honey.  Love you.

Denise~
I just love that phrase ...
'as always'
Makes me feel I did it right.  
Love you.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
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11 posted 2000-03-02 11:26 PM


Fortunately these are only feary tales and scenario's of things gone by... Thank God..! It's nice to dream like Balladeer who apparently sometimes feels we've never taken the opportunity to meet these "other..." and he don't love 'em any less (and might I add never will)... O philosophy... Darn it..! I think I lost my train of thought, and to think it was all right there just a secoud ago. Oh Well, another auld lang syne.
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12 posted 2000-03-02 11:40 PM


Lucky~
Thank you for liking
(you did mean to mention that didn't you?)


If you hurry you can catch
the next train !  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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lucky
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13 posted 2000-03-03 12:37 PM


With those kind of kookies I could keep you on top forever... shhh, don't tell.
tracie66
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14 posted 2000-03-03 04:08 AM


Oh so beautiful, very touching Marge


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Anne Rooks

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15 posted 2000-03-03 06:37 AM


Lucky~
LOL !  I won't if you don't.  

Tracie~
Hi there again, little friend.
Glad you found it so.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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hoot_owl_rn
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16 posted 2000-03-03 08:33 AM


Oh my...this certainly catches my heart strings and pulls at them a bit. Absolutely beautiful my friend  
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17 posted 2000-03-03 11:57 AM


Hoot~
Awwwwwwww !  
Thanks for letting me know.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2000-03-03 12:19 PM


This is lovely, Marge! *S*
Gemini
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19 posted 2000-03-03 02:10 PM


Marge: You make me believe in the power of love-nice piece.
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20 posted 2000-03-03 02:44 PM


Suthern~
Lovely of you to let me know.

Gemini~
If I had anything to do with
that .... I'm smiling for you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Dark Angel
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21 posted 2000-03-03 03:00 PM


Oh Marge, absolutley beautiful!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2000-03-03 03:09 PM


DarkAngel~
Ohhhhhhhhh !  Thank you soooooooo much.
I kind of just knew you'd like it.  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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23 posted 2000-03-03 09:42 PM


I'm so glad I saw this one, Marge...I love it, and am moved by its striking truth! Beautiful!

~ Claire

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24 posted 2000-03-03 09:52 PM


Claire~
That makes two of us !
I'm so glad to share it with you.
If it moves you ... I've earned my smile.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marina
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25 posted 2000-03-03 11:05 PM


Beautiful Marge! One of your best...

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-03-2000).]

Angel
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26 posted 2000-03-04 12:11 PM


Jeez, I've been gone for a few days...between doctor's appointments and my mom's computer having yet another virus...and I come back and by some miracle you write a poem I love even more than the last. I don't know how you manage, but I'm glad you do  .

 ~Susie~


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27 posted 2000-03-04 12:22 PM


Very beautiful expression from the heart. Nice  

*Leaves me feeling warm and thinking of my special someone*

Kim

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28 posted 2000-03-04 12:26 PM


Hi Marge,

What can I say that has not already been said, nothing but it is wonderful and I love it, I enjoy your poetry so much, thank you.

Cerenity

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29 posted 2000-03-04 01:27 AM


Marge, I know of this person you speak, and we have never met, touched, kissed, and when we ever meet I will love them even more.
Beautiful.....

Parker

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30 posted 2000-03-04 02:14 AM


Marina~
Thank you.  Glad you enjoyed.

Angel~
So glad you are better.  Thank you
for being here.

KimW~
Thank you and welcome to Passion's.

Cerenity~
Your comments are always welcomed by
this lady.

Parker~
Oh ..... now this is a man with ~heart~.
Thank you, Parker ... it pleases me
that you enjoy the things I write.  
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Pepper
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31 posted 2000-03-04 09:36 AM


Marge , your muse was working overtime on this one !!!  'S'
I LOVE it !!!!!!!!!!

Marge Tindal
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32 posted 2000-03-04 10:02 AM


Hi, little Pepper~
Just seeing your little name gave me a reason to be joyous this morning.  
So glad you enjoyed the musings of my heart.
Love you, gal !
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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