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Mystykyl
Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 32


0 posted 2000-03-02 06:47 PM



You have always been a great friend
No matter what has happened
I messed up when I dumped you
But at the same time, I've learnt some valuable lessons
I'm just glad you are always there to listen
It seems that right now you're the only one really paying attention
I don't know how to express all I feel for you in words
I don't even know if I like how the poem goes
But lets just say you saved my life and for that I'm very greatful
Thank you and I owe you is about as close as I can come to my feeling for you
I really love you but I don't know how you feel
I just hope I can always be your friend
And I hope you're always there
I love you Eddie
You are great
Thanks
I owe you


 

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-03-02 11:30 PM


Someone certainly touched your heart! I think you expressed very well.

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There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

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