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Senryu: Lover's Quarrel
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Senryu: Lover's Quarrel |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Senryu: Lover's Quarrel 5-7-5 Cries echo through the night mournful hollow melody foolish lover's quarrel Melissa Honeybee  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Sorrow echos through the morrow tears wring out the pain let's no longer quarrel Loved your poem Rex}<{{{{o> I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Melissa, so small with so much meaning... Great job. Parker |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Melissa, loved this very much, very beautiful! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You certainly do have this down pat |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ I greatly admire your talent with this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Rex, Haleyja, Dark Angel, Hoot and Marge thank you so much for the compliments, I am blushing at what you said Marge! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Another excellent piece of work |
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