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Senryu: Lover's Quarrel

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Honeybee
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Senryu: Lover's Quarrel 5-7-5

Cries echo through the night
mournful hollow melody
foolish lover's quarrel

Melissa Honeybee  
© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sorrow echos through the morrow
tears wring out the pain
let's no longer quarrel

Loved your poem

Rex}<{{{{o>


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Melissa, so small with so much meaning...
Great job.

Parker
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Melissa, loved this very much, very beautiful!  

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You certainly do have this down pat  
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Melissa~
I greatly admire your talent
with this.
~*Marge*~


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Honeybee
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  Rex, Haleyja, Dark Angel, Hoot and Marge thank you so much for the compliments, I am blushing at what you said Marge!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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Another excellent piece of work  
 
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