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Senryu: Untitled

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Honeybee
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Senryu: Untitled 5-7-5


Yesterday's regrets
tomorrow's apprehensions
imprisons today

Melissa Honeybee  
© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-02-2000 05:44 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Well said.  Such wise words.
What does Senryu mean???  Sorry to show my ignorance.
Parker
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... the old black rum


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Melissa , Just so much meaning in so few words. I really like this one.

Parker
hoot_owl_rn
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Wise words Melissa  
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~melissa


this is the truth for sure! wish more people would take this and put it to use though. wonderful statement.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Honeybee
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  Thank you all for the kind words, this is probably my favourite senryu that I have written.  It came so easy to me and I just had to share it with all of you.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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6 posted 03-06-2000 06:45 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Too true...

I like!



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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
 
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