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haiku..... A Kiss

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Parker
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... the old black rum


0 posted 03-02-2000 02:33 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

A Kiss

Thunder in the mind
madness engulfs the body
wanton lips shall meet.




Parker (c)2000





[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-03-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 James Parker Haley - All Rights Reserved
Marina
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1 posted 03-02-2000 03:22 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

James this is definately something very different from you. I like it. It's intriging.

Marina
Martie
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2 posted 03-02-2000 03:27 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Writing with the heart
what the lip's intend
complete in three small lines
Tara Simms
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3 posted 03-02-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Woo Hoo! Pucker up, Parker! *smack*
Parker
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4 posted 03-02-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

I don't know if this is true to the haiku form of 5-7-5, and whatever other rules apply, but its fun to write.

Parker
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5 posted 03-03-2000 06:27 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow Parker...that certainly speaks volumes  
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6 posted 03-03-2000 06:46 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Whoa !
You can just 'park-er' right here !
Great to see you playing !
~*Marge~


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Parker
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Hoot, stop talking and keep kissing.  


Marge, Oh I am a very playfull guy.......


Parker
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8 posted 03-03-2000 10:47 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Haleyja,
5-7-5 reads right to me. Well done.
kitkat
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9 posted 03-03-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

I liked this. I do not know much about haiku either but it sounds right. You inspired me to try one.
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10 posted 03-03-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

But not on the first date

Rex}<{{{{o>


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11 posted 03-03-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

WELL DONE!  I enjoy Haiku and am glad to see others practicing the style. Your form is just right by me.  You will find that english poets often stray from the classical 5-7-5 format.  However you choose to do it...the real challange is to pack as much meaning into as few words as possible.

Again.....WELL DONE!
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12 posted 03-03-2000 01:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great Parker! Well done!

ROFL Rex!!  

Denise
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Hiya Parker...I like, I like very much, I'm a fan of Haiku myself!

Love came spring morning,
rain sang in tune with thunder,
found this kiss waiting.

Corinne

Parker
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Seymour and KitKat, thank you, their fun to write.

Rex.... sometimes the best kiss, is the first date kiss, or maybe its the challange of the first date kiss.

INclan, yes meaning, packs and packs of meaning...... thanks.

Corinne, waiting and longing....

Parker

Elizabeth Santos
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15 posted 03-03-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sounds good to me.
Sums it up, short and sweet
Liz
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Parker, this is delicious...of course, "some" kissses defy description.  

~ Claire
Parker
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Liz, thanks....

Claire, I believe that you are right, thats why they must be tasted.

Parker
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18 posted 03-04-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

You've gotten quite good at this form I see!!! And don't worry, I'll wait in line for my kiss...I'm sure tis worth waiting for!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Parker
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devina, you don't have to wait in line, just lean over mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm smack.

Parker
sonjes
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20 posted 03-04-2000 08:50 AM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

I think you have started a trend, dear.
Inspiration is thy name:

Honeysuckle red
Nestled in creamy crocus
Wating for the "bee"

I don't know if honeysuckle can be red, but it fit, so oh well!
Write more, we love it!


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Parker
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sonjes, Wow that is so sensual, I like.

Parker
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22 posted 05-25-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

as a member of the opposite sex who just melts with a deep sensuous kiss, I must say (on good authority) that this descibes it perfectly!
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wow!
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