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Parker
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0 posted 03-02-2000 02:22 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

In the spirit of beki's haiku..... I don't think its very good and maybe too simple....

Rain
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Falling through night air
splashing softly on dark ground
quiet sounds of rain.

Parker




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sweetcollege_girl
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just about where I want to be


1 posted 03-02-2000 02:25 PM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

liked the haiku, Parker.

It was great! Just as great as Beki's!  \

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

Marina
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Obivouisly we are in a major Haiku mood! I think you should write this form of poetry more often.  Since as usual, you have the talent for it.

Marina
Honeybee
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Simply beautiful!  You do have a talent for haikus, please share some more!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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