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haiku...... Rain |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
In the spirit of beki's haiku..... I don't think its very good and maybe too simple.... Rain --------- Falling through night air splashing softly on dark ground quiet sounds of rain. Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
liked the haiku, Parker. It was great! Just as great as Beki's!  \stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Obivouisly we are in a major Haiku mood! I think you should write this form of poetry more often. Since as usual, you have the talent for it. Marina |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Simply beautiful! You do have a talent for haikus, please share some more! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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