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Sunshine

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0 posted 2000-03-02 02:16 PM

Come flow with me, come be my love true
come glow with me, we’ll start anew.
Slowly move your fingers along toward mine
and play with me this pantomime.

Use your eyes to caress my naked soul
and linger on in my artless heart
for I know it to be my virtuous goal
that never shall we part.

Use that prose that only you speak
and lift me high until I peak
and nay do not cast me downward sire,
but slowly drown in my desire.

With fingertips warm do softly play
and, listen wistful to what I say:
when your hands reach beyond my touch:
know that I love you, oh, so much.

Embrace me whole, enfold my all,
till love’s rapture doth me call
and I fall within your passion so deep:
as you sow, so shall you reap.

Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

bobbycat
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1 posted 2000-03-02 02:22 PM

Simply beautiful.

Bobbycat =^..^=

~~Blessed Be!~~

bobbycat
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2 posted 2000-03-02 02:22 PM

Simply beautiful.

Bobbycat =^..^=

~~Blessed Be!~~

bobbycat
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3 posted 2000-03-02 02:24 PM

Whoops......sorry about the double posts.....my computer went haywire for a few minutes there.......

Bobbycat =^..^=

~~Blessed Be!~~

Sunshine

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4 posted 2000-03-02 05:43 PM

Well Bobbycat, at least you made this look popular for a moment. Glad you enjoyed, and a belated Welcome to Passions!

Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Meadowmuse
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5 posted 2000-03-02 08:51 PM

This is a beautiful poem, Sunshine...full of grace and desire.

"Embrace me whole, enfold my all,
till love’s rapture doth me call
and I fall within your passion so deep:
as you sow, so shall you reap."

~ Claire

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06

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6 posted 2000-03-02 09:21 PM

"when your hands reach beyond my touch:"
Wow i like this one. So deep. Well done sunshine, very nice

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

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7 posted 2000-03-02 09:31 PM

Yes, I agree with those above, there are some very beautiful phrases in this poem
WEll done!
Liz

Denise

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8 posted 2000-03-02 11:44 PM

Sunshine, this is exquisite! Wow! Wonderful! I love it!

Denise

Sunshine

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9 posted 2000-03-03 09:14 AM

I am honored by all of your comments. Thank you for putting forth the lines you have enjoyed best.

Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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