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Sunshine
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Come flow with me, come be my love true
come glow with me, we’ll start anew.
Slowly move your fingers along toward mine
and play with me this pantomime.

Use your eyes to caress my naked soul
and linger on in my artless heart
for I know it to be my virtuous goal
that never shall we part.

Use that prose that only you speak
and lift me high until I peak
and nay do not cast me downward sire,
but slowly drown in my desire.

With fingertips warm do softly play
and, listen wistful to what I say:
when your hands reach beyond my touch:
know that I love you, oh, so much.

Embrace me whole, enfold my all,
till love’s rapture doth me call
and I fall within your passion so deep:
as you sow, so shall you reap.



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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1 posted 03-02-2000 02:22 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Simply beautiful.    

Bobbycat =^..^=


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2 posted 03-02-2000 02:22 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Simply beautiful.    

Bobbycat =^..^=


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3 posted 03-02-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Whoops......sorry about the double posts.....my computer went haywire for a few minutes there.......    

Bobbycat =^..^=


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4 posted 03-02-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Well Bobbycat, at least you made this look popular for a moment.  Glad you enjoyed, and a belated Welcome to Passions!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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5 posted 03-02-2000 08:51 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This is a beautiful poem, Sunshine...full of grace and desire.

"Embrace me whole, enfold my all,
till love’s rapture doth me call
and I fall within your passion so deep:
as you sow, so shall you reap."

~ Claire

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6 posted 03-02-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

"when your hands reach beyond my touch:"
Wow i like this one. So deep. Well done sunshine, very nice


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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7 posted 03-02-2000 09:31 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Yes, I agree with those above, there are some very beautiful phrases in this poem
WEll done!
Liz
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8 posted 03-02-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sunshine, this is exquisite! Wow! Wonderful! I love it!  

Denise
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9 posted 03-03-2000 09:14 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I am honored by all of your comments.  Thank you for putting forth the lines you have enjoyed best.  

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


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