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Summer Rain
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Summer Rain |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I remember that night like it was yesterday You and me and the summer rain Never again will I love anyone that way Like I loved you in the summer rain The rain was soft like the touch of your skin The gentle caress of the summer rain When I kissed you, I was lost in that spin The spin of the drops of summer rain I saw the flash of lightning and felt the crash of thunder Feeling the power of the summer rain I don't want to escape the spell that I'm under The sound of your heart and the summer rain I can feel your breath on my neck, as hot as the wind Blowing through the trees with the summer rain Stay here with me tonight, my lover, my friend Hearing our cries melding with the sounds of the summer rain Kiss me again and leave me never Feeling the warmth of the summer rain Love me now, I'll love you forever My heart skipping a beat when I hear the summer rain ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
wow....I can feel each raindrop as they fall to my skin.....this is so full of emotion, of desire...excellent work.  Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I leave for a minute...and what do I find...you getting all romantic and loving on me??? LOL This is truly sweet Sven, and there's nothing more intoxicating than summer rain...you've captured it well m'dear!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Devina. .. I'm full of surprises, aren't I? --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You certainly are full of surprises hon, * I remember laughing till we almost cried, there at the station that night, I remember looking in your eyes....* As always beautiful and you touched my heart Sven, thank you. And that's a double thankyou inuendo using my song and all *HUGS and NAMASTE*  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I love the summer rain...and your powm made me feel like i was in it. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderfully romantic Sven.....James |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
Sven, This is incredibly soothing, wonderfully romantic and just simply beautiful! ~Shell |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, I do believe someone turned up the heat in here. Two of my favorite subjects...passion and the rain |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Listen to the rhythm...  Full of surprises, eh? Surprised at your good poetry? I expect nothing less, my friend.. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~sven well arent we the romantic! this is wonderful, friend. the summer rain...brings back a few of my own memories i could really picture this in my mind. thanks for the smile...beautiful piece of poetry!amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sven this brought a smile to my face! Summer nights, and the sweet smell of summer rain. Wonderful poem! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is a tender poem, Sven - a very nice read. K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Pitter-pattering it's way into my heart. Gentle flow the rains of another's memories. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Oh, how sweet! One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Wonderful read Sven....but your causing me all kinds of problem down here...my wife keeps reading your posts...she's thinking of leaving me for u..LOL...j/k. Tanks for a wonderful read. Chris |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Isis. . .how could I not use your song? Shelley. . . glad you liked. . . makes you want to play in the rain doesn't it? James and Saxoness. . . glad that you liked. . and Saxoness, why aren't you really? Hoot. . .no heat. . .just the coolnesss of the rain. . . Aimster. . .always nice to make you smile. . WhtDove, Severn, Angel, Marge. . .with such responses as yours. . .I know that I'm doing something right!! Thank you all. . . Chris. . .sorry, don't mean to cause you trouble. . .just don't let your wife read any more of my poems!! LOL. . . glad that you (both!) liked. . -------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I love the rain. A very beautiful poem Sven.I like listen to the rhythm of the rain it always makes me feel relaxed. Marina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Then let me send a storm your way Marina. . . ---------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it very much!!!!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Going through the archives eh vandana? Well, I hope that you like what you find! Thank you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I am glad that I discovered this in the archives. This is just so beautiful, it is now one of my favourites, I can't believe that I missed this the first time. Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a soft wow... |
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