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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-03-02 01:26 PM


A little Bump

Statues falling all around
I bumped one
now it's on the ground.

Another one came crashing
around me
they all were thrashing.

I'm trying to run away
I see them
they want me to play.

I'm gonna hide behind here
in silence
I sit in excruciating fear.

A statue I am not at all
yet I run
as together they all do fall.

A little bump I didn't mean
creating now
a chain reaction scene.

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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
1 posted 2000-03-02 04:09 PM


LOL Gloria, a chain reaction you most certainly create, in more than one way !  
Liked this poem though !  

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-03-02 06:25 PM


Maazing the consequences that occur from one motion  
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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3 posted 2000-03-03 12:01 PM


Don't you hate that when that happens?!!
Great poem, Gloria!!

Denise

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