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Spreading Through

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kitkat
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0 posted 03-02-2000 11:09 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kitkat

Feelings of despair
Coming from who knows where
Deep down from inside
Spreading through my body wide.

I long to be with him tonight
In his arms I feel so right.
The tenderness of his touch and kiss
Is what now I truly miss.

There are no strings to tie us down
Iím not a fool, he is no clown
We are sometimes blind, we need to see
To be able to set our souls free.

To tell each other how we feel
Is it imaginary or is it real.
Does he feel the same as me?
Only time will tell of the truth to be.

To feel so strong about this guy
It feels so good sometimes I cry.
Every time I feel this way
I close my eyes and begin to pray.

Iím scared to tell him my emotion
I care for him with total devotion.
I wonder what he feel inside.
Spreading through his body wide.


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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-02-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

kk, this is an emotionally excellent poem, sweetly expressed, well written. take care, janet marie

 When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger...
And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool
So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger
While the loneliness seems to spring from your life
Like a fountain from a pool.

Jackson Browne

Danny Holloway
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2 posted 03-02-2000 11:20 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Nice verse and rhyme!  
Feelings are expressed very well also.
Good piece.
Enola
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3 posted 03-02-2000 12:08 PM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

This is such an expressive poem, so beautiful.  I hope I get to see more of it.
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4 posted 03-03-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

KitKat~
Marvelous emotions you've shared.
For goodness sake ... TELL HIM !
~*Marge*~


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kitkat
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5 posted 03-04-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Thank-you all for your replys.When written from the heart emotion flows from soul to paper.
Yes Marge I told Him. We been togather almost 7 years now. Thanks again
JamesMichael
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6 posted 03-04-2000 05:39 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very beautiful thoughts.   I enjoyed the part "I long to be with him tonight...in his arms I feel so right...the tenderness of his touch and kiss...is what now I truly miss.  Sounds like a lovely relationship.   James
Nurse Crachet
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7 posted 03-04-2000 06:20 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

This is so beautiful, you expressed yourself well.
Denise
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8 posted 03-04-2000 12:34 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I agree! This is so beautiful, Kitkat!  

Denise
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