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Waterfall Of Lust

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Nurse Crachet
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Waterfall Of Lust

So I now slowly retreat from the closed door of desire
yet nothing seems to be able to extinguish this fire.
Crayons in sixty-four colors dissolving before me,
wax burning with intense desire for only thee.
The wax master alive with his creativity
molding his scenes in sensitivity
as my desire tries to flee.

My hands held out in sorrow for my weakness
a vision of a rainbow dancing within me,
the tears of rain a waterfall of lust
given for a colorful personality
that without even a touch
ignited the flames
of my desire.

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eyesplus2
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1 posted 03-02-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eyesplus2

im ready to color!! very good poem
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 03-02-2000 11:34 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I like this as well.  and the structure too.
Nurse Crachet
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eyesplus2, Thank you for reading and replying

Danny Holloway, Thank you kindly
 
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