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Glimmering Glow

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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 03-02-2000 08:17 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Glimmering Glow

Somewhere,
somehow yesterday
this nurse
let down her guard
and in walked
a sense of pride.
She chased
and chased away
the shadows
of herself revealed
from the object
of her desire.
The sight
was not a pretty one
for invisible
she seemed to be
as one more beautiful
in nature
blocked out her
glimmering glow.
Now
she turns to leave
real slowly
as the glimmer
that never was real
glows
within her illusional mind,
and the world
of reality
but a nightcap
away.

© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
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1 posted 03-02-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Lovely poem, I like this lots, the way you have written it is cool, I look forward to seeing more .


 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 03-02-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nurse...you certainly have been busy   Nice poem  
Nurse Crachet
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3 posted 03-02-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

angelswing, Thank you

Hoot, Thank you
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 03-02-2000 05:08 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

My Lady White
This one is not with out heart
To see what could have been
Had you the flame
To light the wick
Of my soul.
But I burn by another's touch
Who's light outshines all others
Before my eyes
And my heart.
My Lady White
I beseech thee
Do not douse your own light
For mine are but one set of eyes
And where they are blind to your glow
There is another
who will know
who will see
who will feel
Beauty
Love
And Life
By its flame


[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 03-02-2000).]
Nurse Crachet
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5 posted 03-03-2000 09:59 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

My crayons of love I offered free
if only in your arms
you could've simply cradled me.

Now in darkness of empty nights
candles melted
my soul begone of colorful sights.

In the illumination of your soul
lies the crayons
as with them my heart you stole.

Tomorrow's light may shine on you
brightly as such
but for me it's lost in love's curfew.
Denise
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6 posted 03-03-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poems!!  

Denise
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 03-05-2000 03:26 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

NurseC~
I liked this a lot.
Both of them were longingly presented.

'Tomorrow's light may shine on you
brightly as such
but for me it's lost in love's curfew.'

Brilliant !
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 03-05-2000 08:07 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Dear nurse,I like your words
Both in your post and your response
Liz
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9 posted 03-05-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ah, there is some fine poetry in this post... post and replies both!
Nurse Crachet
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10 posted 03-06-2000 06:25 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Dsnyder, Thank you your always so kind.

Marge Tindal, Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed them, I had fun writing them.

Elizabeth, Thank you kindly.

Poet Devine, Thank you for reading and enjoying, this has been a wonderful challenge for me.

[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 03-06-2000).]
 
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