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mete out
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0 posted 2000-03-02 07:02 AM


    

I'm ready this time, this time I am damn ready.
Ready to laugh, ready to hate as freely as I dare without any guilt.
I'm ready to beat them into submission, to stamp on their ugly faces,
Ready to bruise them, to make them bleed as I have bled and ready to feel good about it.
There's colour in my cheeks and blood in my veins and yu're gonna feel, live and breathe my wrath, my strength, my power.
I have been re-born, I'm no longer a used-up, messed-up piece of crap - I'm new, I'm strong.
And you're all gonna pay for what you did.

You're all gonna damn well pay.


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

© Copyright 2000 Louise Parsons - All Rights Reserved
infinat3 sadn3ss
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somerset england
1 posted 2000-03-02 08:17 AM


well now youve done it ! . I hope you do make them pay and dedicate one to me . love ya
cabe

mete out
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2 posted 2000-03-02 10:02 AM


THANX CABES!
I am sooo happy for you regarding 'you know what'.    Go get 'em mate!
All my love,
lou  xxx
P>S>The Humpkins are gonna make the top 10.....yeah?!


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

Enola
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since 2000-02-11
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3 posted 2000-03-02 11:47 AM


Go get 'em, I think I'm going to join you.  It's about time someone paid the price for all the s*** life throws at us.  My apologies for the swearing but it's nessisary.  Keep it up.
angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
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4 posted 2000-03-02 11:52 AM


Hi Lou, this is Tommy boy, Thanks for your reply, this poem is great, I love your strong views and I often find myself thinking that way, but remember that if your positive, life becomes larger . I admire your boldness, write some more, welcome to the family I anticipate great things from you .  

 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

mete out
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5 posted 2000-03-03 05:31 AM


Thanks you two!
I just hope I can keep this positive frame of mind going, it's getting harder right now but with friends like you three, I'll be fine.
Thanks again...


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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6 posted 2000-03-03 05:52 AM


A very strong and sock it to em piece...

Aaah

mete out
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7 posted 2000-03-10 10:03 AM


***Tracie,
Thankyou.
It felt great to write this...it was greta to write...so empowering after ages of somewhat depressing stuff...


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

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