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Wish Upon the Brightest Star

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jeremyc
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0 posted 03-02-2000 06:31 AM       View Profile for jeremyc   Email jeremyc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremyc

as i sit here tonight
alone in the dim moonlight
i can't help but think of you
and all the things you do
that make me feel so good
i'd hold you tight in my arms if i could
but our distance has kept us apart
and left such an aching in my heart
yearning to once again feel your sweet kiss
to feel the gentle carress of your lips
or just to have you close to me
that's the way it's supposed to be
so tonight before i depart,
i'll wish upon the brightest star
that you and i will be together soon
holding each other in the light of the moon
and i have no reason to disbelieve
that this wish i will receive
for i'm living proof that wishes come true
just look at me, girl, i have you
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mete out
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1 posted 03-02-2000 06:52 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

WOW>
I have a lump in my throat the size of Ayres rock.
This poem speaks volumes to me...every night I used to actually wish upon the brightest star in the sky that my partner and I could be together ( he lived some 300 miles away from me in Scotland)...
a beautiful,and for me, a very real poem.
Thankyou.


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2 posted 03-02-2000 06:58 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jeremy~
I like your 'bright wishing star'.
May it shine brightly for you.
~*Marge*~


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jeremyc
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3 posted 03-02-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for jeremyc   Email jeremyc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremyc

hey, mete out..thanx...i'm glad this poem did something for you...as long as one person can relate to it, i think it has done its job...hope you and your man get together soon...


thanx for the reply, marge....
 
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