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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
.......Sing a song of Joy...I will for I have some.....sing a song of Hope....I can because I see some......sing a song of excitement.....I do because Iam excited.....Sing a song of Love.....I do.....because I sing a song of You.....for you are a joy no greater....you are a hope of wishes come true....you are an excitement.....of unboundness measure.....but most of all you are a song of love.....just because you are you....and you are mine....... I love you so |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EyesPlus2~ I like happy, joyful thoughts. This is very nicely said. Welcome to Passion's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
yes - welcome...beautiful thoughts indeed!  K 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Welcome, eyesplus2.  You are certainly spreading your sunshine around here. Perhaps you have inspired me to read only happy, joyful verse today. I will look forward to reading more... |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
This is a beautiful poem. It is wonderful to have a guiding light. Someone to help you thru... I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautifully expressed poem. The layout is unique too. I hope that you show this poem to your special someone. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Welecome to Passions. This was a lovely poem indeed. Nothing like love to make the heart sing -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweet love sings a joyful song. Welcome |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
You said it well, welcome The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You've got a good poem here, have you ever considered changing the formatting to make it a bit more reader friendly...perhaps something like this: Sing a song of Joy I will For I have some Sing a song of Hope I can Because I see some Sing a song of Excitement I do Because I feel it Sing a song of Love I do Because I sing a song of You You are a Joy no greater; A Hope of wishes come true; An Excitement of unboundness measure; But most of all, you are a song of Love Just because you are you And you are mine ...I love you so Welcome to passions [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 03-03-2000).] |
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