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a song

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eyesplus2
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0 posted 03-02-2000 04:00 AM       View Profile for eyesplus2   Email eyesplus2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for eyesplus2


.......Sing a song of Joy...I will for I have some.....sing a song of
Hope....I can because I see some......sing a song of excitement.....I do
because Iam excited.....Sing a song of Love.....I do.....because I sing a
song of You.....for you are a joy no greater....you are a hope of wishes
come true....you are an excitement.....of unboundness measure.....but
most of all you are a song of love.....just because you are you....and you
are mine....... I love you so


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1 posted 03-02-2000 07:05 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

EyesPlus2~
I like happy, joyful thoughts.
This is very nicely said.
Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


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Severn
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yes - welcome...beautiful thoughts indeed!

    

K

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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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Welcome, eyesplus2.
You are certainly spreading your sunshine around here.  Perhaps you have inspired me to read only happy, joyful verse today.  
I will look forward to reading more...
mete out
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4 posted 03-02-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

This is a beautiful poem.
It is wonderful to have a guiding light.
Someone to help you thru...


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
Honeybee
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A beautifully expressed poem.  The layout is unique too. I hope that you show this poem to your special someone.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee    
kitkat
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6 posted 03-02-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Welecome to Passions. This was a lovely poem indeed. Nothing like love to make the heart sing

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King


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Sweet love sings a joyful song.  Welcome
HelmutB
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You said it well, welcome

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

hoot_owl_rn
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You've got a good poem here, have you ever considered changing the formatting to make it a bit more reader friendly...perhaps something like this:

Sing a song of Joy
I will
For I have some

Sing a song of Hope
I can
Because I see some

Sing a song of Excitement
I do
Because I feel it

Sing a song of Love
I do
Because I sing a song of You

You are a Joy no greater;
A Hope of wishes come true;
An Excitement of unboundness measure;
But most of all, you are a song of Love

Just because you are you
And you are mine
...I love you so


Welcome to passions  



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