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Love And Rehabilitation

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rathi
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0 posted 03-02-2000 03:49 AM       View Profile for rathi   Email rathi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rathi

I do not carry your picture in my wallet,
for i keep the memoriesinmy heart for a later date.
I use this cliche to prove a point,
loves like this will last the test of time.

I fear the world and the circumstances that surround me,
I loathe the world and the circumstances that entrap me.
I feel like a pawn being useless and dispensable,
i want to be with you, near and presentable

But now ive changed, gone is the love you took away,
its your fault and i now i hate the feeling in every way.
you dont appeal to me so much anymore,
i am stronger,yet what will i do at the next loves shore.

I don't cry no more at the sadness i felt,
it was wrong, i am no longer in debt,
Yet, sometimes i wish it would be the same,
And altogether, it was alla wishful aim.

- Ritesh

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mete out
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since 02-16-2000
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1 posted 03-02-2000 07:26 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

This poem struck a chord with me....so many emotions caught up within it.
A very eloquent portrayal of how it feels when we have lost love.
Be sure to know that our hearts are with you here at passions.



 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.
Songbird
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2 posted 03-02-2000 07:51 PM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

You have some very beautiful lines in this poem. Very well written.
Aimster
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3 posted 03-02-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Rathi...

this is excellent...something different and unique. i mean that in a good way   seriously very expressive poem, loved all the lines especially the last stanza...i stand impressed. great job!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
HelmutB
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since 01-06-2000
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4 posted 03-02-2000 08:56 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Love does not require a picture
For it is within your heart
Well done and welcome to Passions

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

WhtDove
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5 posted 03-02-2000 11:04 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME!  Hope to see more from you!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
 
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