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The Kiss

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bobbycat
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0 posted 03-01-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bobbycat

The Kiss
********

a touch--

light
and feathery soft
your figertips
to my lips
as you silence me...

a caress--

hesitant
yet skillful
your finger
under my chin
as you lean closer...

a gaze--

long
and lingering
your eyes
into mine
as you search for an answer...

a kiss--

gentle
as a summer rain
your lips
to mine
as I close my eyes...

a rhythm--

quick
and pounding
my heartbeat
into yours
as they dance together...

an emotion--

desire
and anticipation
your arms
around my body
as we melt into one...

a journey--

slow
and enjoyable
your heart
open to mine
as I bare my soul to you...

a ringing--

alarming
and annoying
sunlight
in my window
as I pry opem my eyes

a dream--

it was all a dream
a journey interrupted
a sigh escapes me
as I greet the new day

it was nothing but a fantasy...

© Copyright 2000 Christina L. Petrosky - All Rights Reserved
sonjes
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1 posted 03-01-2000 10:19 PM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

Too bad it was all a dream, I was starting to enjoy it myself.  Wish I had dreams like that.
I love the structure of this poem and it oh so makes me want to be kissed! Great read, bobbycat.
bobbycat
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2 posted 03-01-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Thanks, Sonjes--glad you liked it!  

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~
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BobbyCat~
Pretty gosh-darned good 'fantasy'
and one FANTASTIC DREAM !
Go back to sleep ......  
~*Marge*~


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eyesplus2
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What a wonderful Kiss it was........that describes a kiss to a tee....very nice poem
Poeminister
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bobbycat,

Continue to have sweet dreams...lovely poem




 "...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Edgar Allen Poe (from Serenade)
bobbycat
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6 posted 03-02-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Marge, eyesplus2, and Poeminister--thank you all so very much for reading....I'm glad you liked it!  

Bobbycat =^..=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~
PoeticKnight
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7 posted 03-02-2000 01:40 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

I enjoyed this one very much. The kiss is the best thing in life, not to be rushed, but relished like it was the last time you would ever experience such delight. You captured it so well, and the way you did your lines really added to it.
bobbycat
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Thank you, JML...that's exactly the thought I was trying to convey.  I thank you for reading.  

Bobbycat =^..^=
sweetcollege_girl
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Liked the poem bobbycat. Especially the twist at the end. very descriptive  

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

 
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