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Tomorrows path

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Seymour Tabin
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           Tomorrows path

There is a place down by the sea,
Enthrals my spirit and calls to me.
Where waves wash down in gentle hand
Upon the white and soothing sand

Each crest of wave in tender soar.
Speaks to me in gentle roar.
And the wind blows in sultry brine,
Showering me in wet benign.

The smell of the sea lures me down,
It offers me a Neptune crown.
It sings to me a siren tune.
Ever under a sky blue noon.

It tolls for me eternal rhyme,
In voices and in echoes chime.
It plays a golden harp of peace
And offers me supreme surcease.

The tomorrow of a cul-de-sac,
It's to the sea we are all called back.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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Oh Sy, I know this place so well.  What a beautiful poem!
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 03-01-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I was just ready to close down my computer for the night, when this wonderful poem appeared, and now I will sleep to the rhythms of the tides and the smell of salty air. Enrapturing poetry.
Love ya
Liz
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3 posted 03-01-2000 09:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~

On the shoreline stand we now
waves breaking at our feet.
Ever back, we are called
the pleasure to repeat.

I like what you do to the sea !
I like what your poetry does to me !
~*Marge*~  



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Gemini
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4 posted 03-01-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Conjours up some great imagery.  Very well written.
Alwye
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5 posted 03-01-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Soft, gentle, and beautiful..I really must see the ocean.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

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6 posted 03-02-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow...the ocean is a muse to me I think.

I grew up on the shores of a wild ocean, and it lulled me to sleep each night...I pine for it now - although I live in my city surrounded by beaches they are certainly not in walking distance anymore!

Thanks for this Sy, this beauty in poetry.

K
Michael
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7 posted 03-02-2000 05:13 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I feel it to, SY.  It's mesmerizing as is your poem.  Beautifully done.


Michael
Seymour Tabin
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Martie, Elizabeth, Marge, Germini, Alwye, severn, Michael, My sincere thanks to all of you I do enjoy your comments more then I can say. *L* to all. Sy
hoot_owl_rn
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Lovely Sy  
Denise
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10 posted 03-02-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Sy! This has been on my mind for the past 2 or 3 days in earnest....'to the sea'.....one of these weekends soon, for sure!

Denise
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To the heights I reach for thee,
whilst my friend visits the Sea;
to each of us shall a passing wave
his of water, mine of blue haze.

Well done Sy!  Thank you.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Seymour Tabin
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Hoot, Thank you for the lovely. *L*

Denise, It's a wonderfully restful place. Thank you for the comment. *L*

Sunshine, Thank you for the beautiful comment. *L*
Meadowmuse
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You've got a style all your own, Seymour...liked this so much.

~ Claire
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 03-04-2000 02:30 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Meadow,
From one style to another, thank you much.
JamesMichael
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Yes the ocean always beacons me to enjoy its beauty, its raging, and its mystery.  I have always tried to live close to the sea. James
 
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