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The Love Of A Bard (not of the 'Stute)

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Andrew Scott
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0 posted 03-01-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Andrew Scott

I trace a lover's line
Across your face
Down your neck
Over your body
Instrument of desire
Cradled in gentle hands
Feel my caress
And softly sing
Notes of the heart
To touch the soul

© Copyright 2000 Andrew Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-01-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

What a beautiful poem. It deserves a high place on this page.  
BrightLight
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2 posted 03-01-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for BrightLight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrightLight

Wow, do you supply a fan with this or am I on my own? Very intensely beautiful poem here.
Martie
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Wow!  Your words are the melody I think..and beautiful!
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4 posted 03-01-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Whew...I think I will go open a window now......       great job!

Bobbycat =^..^=


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5 posted 03-01-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Andrew! This is perfect! Love it.....
Meadowmuse
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Sensuality spills from this lingering verse, Andrew. Very nice.

~ Claire
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Welcome back from the 'stute, Sir Andrew. This is exquisite  
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Andrew~
I like.
Lots.
Then a little bit more.
~*Marge*~


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Andrew~nice read.

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Very stunning images. very good
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Alrighty then. How gentle and alluring and sensual this poem is.  I only envy the one it is written for.  I loved this, and it is so succint.  You didn't have to say any more than you did, and I got goosebumps.

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There are many unexpected & thrilling surprises in store for you.
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I envy the one who inspired you to this poem. What an exquisite poem to be the inspiration of ! (I think now I will have a cold shower   )
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Sigh.........what a man......




 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou

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14 posted 03-02-2000 09:54 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

You should escape the 'stute more often... this one is colored so beautifully even without using a single crayon! *G* Well done, Andrew!!
Andrew Scott
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Oh my! You've all made me blush in turn.  Thank you so very much for your kindness of word... your responses are the coin of the realm, valued greatly in my heart.

I'd like to offer some personal insight on this one if I may.  This piece is written from the perspective of a bard to his favored "instrument", the lute. His "first love" if you will.  And certain parts of the lute, the distant cousin to the guitar, are known as the "face", "neck", and "body."  His caress across the strings makes her sing the song in his heart. The soul he touches... whom ever should hear.

And then again...  

Once more, thank you all!
 
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