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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 03-01-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I opened my heart
you cried "let me in"
you became the sun
and I your sin

Two hearts opened
like flowers in sun
following each other
new life had begun

Honesty knew no bounds
petals growing with life
trust was never doubted
love made us man and wife

papers were never signed
no ritual ever took place
all we had and all we knew
was love in sound and space

To be desired is magic
as a smile lights my face
to be the one that gives
can only ever hold one place

some loves will go on caring
not as two but one
as petals slowly turn their heads
away from the magic of the sun...



 I dropped a tear in the ocean
when it is found, I will stop loving you...




[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 03-01-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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1 posted 03-01-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This is intimate and sweet, Rainbow Girl...I love your ~

"all we had and all we knew
was love in sound and space"

A beautiful ode to devotion...

~ Claire


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 03-01-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

RainbowGirl~
You reached out and tapped me
on the shoulder-of-recognition
with this one .....

'trust was never doubted'

Ahhhhh .... the key phrase.
Wonderfully done, lady.
~*Marge*~



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RufffRyder
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<------Over There------>


3 posted 03-01-2000 07:52 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

What a lucky man he is to have his heart join yours to become one.
Beautiful read Rainbow.
Thank you
Balladeer
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4 posted 03-01-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent writing, Rainbow  
passing shadows
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5 posted 03-01-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

this is beautiful RG. You amaze me.

 ~shadows dance by the light within~


Parker
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... the old black rum


6 posted 03-01-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

RainbowGirl, ..... I think the last line really says it...

as petals slowly turn their heads
away from the magic of the sun...


Loved truely.

Parker
WhtDove
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7 posted 03-01-2000 09:00 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Wow! It's great to see your spirit uplifted! This is wonderful RG!
Corazon
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8 posted 03-02-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

the last 2 lines, the whole thing...great writing rg, and yep I know...we always write the best when bleeding the most....sigh...big hugs lady
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9 posted 03-02-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Good work, Rainbow gal!
Local Rebel
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10 posted 03-02-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

oooh.... very hot...very wh...nice! huggsZzz
RainbowGirl
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11 posted 03-02-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Meadowmuse: Thank you sweetheart..

Marge: I don't believe love can exist in its purest form without trust..

RufffRyder: I think you got hold of the wrong end of the pitball *g* here..LOL

Bal: Thanks sweetheart..

PS: Good to see you about again..

Haleyja: I wondered if that would make sense to anyone, guess it did..

WhtDove: Thanks sweetheart..

Corazon: Well, in my experience, hearts do best when hurting cause then they open up..

Suthern: Thanks MotherHen..

LR: WH...hmmmm, you think?..

HUGS all

 I dropped a tear in the ocean
when it is found, I will stop loving you...
Denise
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12 posted 03-02-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Cindy! Very beautiful!

Denise
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