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Beginning of Love

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Danny Holloway
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0 posted 03-01-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Danny Holloway


             Beginning of Love
        
         A new love, like the sun
      bringing forth, a  new someone
    making each day warm and bright
    filling everything with radiant light

      All thats within wanting to give
       in another life longing to live
    seeking to know are feelings true
      endless hours spent lovin you

        Dwelling in shadows of my mind
        others before i'm now so blind
       yearnings to stir deep within me
          by your side, i'm aching to be

       Writing for hours, just your name
      fantasy moments playing love's game
     thoughts so strong making heart pound
        images of you now in surround

        Never before such luminous sky
      reflections of us in clouds gone by
     your carresses so tender on me overall
        in your arms, soft place to fall

         Love has arrived, finally here
       cupid and angels starting to cheer
         down that path my heart doth go
      that emotional side only love can show

        A sense of us there from the start
          so natural us heart to heart
          onward now our destiny bound
       Love has begun, let trumpets sound.




 

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1 posted 03-01-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

YAY,DannyYAY!!! Trumpets are sounding! I REALLY liked this poem!   -SEA
Marina
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2 posted 03-01-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Danny this is a very romantic poem.  I like this one, it's one of your best.  Do you have any other hidden abilities besides poetry writing....I would be more then willing to be your assistant if you would like to demonstate.

Marina
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3 posted 03-01-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Danny~
Wonderful soft images you've painted
with these words.

'in your arms, soft place to fall'

Reminds me of someone special.
Thanks for shaking the memory tree.
~*Marge*~



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4 posted 03-01-2000 07:59 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

This has such an aire of sentiment and romance, Danny. Wonderful writing...radiant reading. Thank you!

~ Claire
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5 posted 03-01-2000 08:20 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie


       Writing for hours, just your name
      fantasy moments playing love's game
     thoughts so strong making heart pound
        images of you now in surround

        Never before such luminous sky
      reflections of us in clouds gone by
     your carresses so tender on me overall
        in your arms, soft place to fall

Danny, this is such an emotionally perfect and lovefilled poem, how excellent. so many times "love poems" come out "sappy". this one is full of devotion and romance..very well expressed! take care, janet marie

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be...
Jackson Browne
*I miss you baby...
I love you...always.

hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 03-01-2000 08:40 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh...I do like love poems  
PhaerieChild
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7 posted 03-01-2000 09:34 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Danny...this is beautifully written! "Writing for hours just your name"
How well I remember doing that!! Wonderful love poem!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


kitkat
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8 posted 03-01-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for kitkat   Email kitkat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kitkat

Wonderful Danny. Let this love wrap around your heart forever.
Gemini
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9 posted 03-01-2000 10:22 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Shout Hurray for this one!  Very well written.  Loved it!
sonjes
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I cannot stomach to read love poetry.  Like JM said, they sound "sappy" too often.  However, I could read this one over and over again.  It almost brought a smile to my face and it definitely let warm feelings into my soul.  Makes me want to do it again... Almost.   When I say that, I know it was an amazing poem.
devina
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11 posted 03-02-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Now Danny...don't you go getting soft on me Mr!!! (by soft I meant...er...nevermind!!)

This was romantic, soft, gentle...very intoxicating hun...I'd say I rather like this side of you too!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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12 posted 03-02-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Sweet comes to mind...mushy also...hehe!

Nive work.



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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
Danny Holloway
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13 posted 03-02-2000 10:19 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Just a note to say thanks to all for such nice responses.
Like most of you, I find many love poems sappy as well.  I chose to post this one because I felt it had a different feeling that went beyond the usual stuff.
Thanks again to all....
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