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Blame it on the Tequila
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Blame it on the Tequila |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
When my tongue gets loose The accusations fly. Tears shed forth and vile words Spew from my mouth. My soul is ripped apart; I fall to my knees Heedless of the strangers' stares. Jose has got a hold of me Controlling my thoughts, actions, words. I scream and curse your name Between declarations of undying love. I tear at my hair,pound my fists; Trying to get you to see The madness and confusion Raging inside my head. You retreat, you Coward! Unable to face my raw emotions. Tomorrow will come with no regrets. I can blame it on the tequila. Can you? [This message has been edited by sonjes (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sonjes~ Wow.... I can blame a heck of a lot on tequila but nothing like this! Great poem.  -SEA |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Tequila is to killya. That stuff can make even the kindest person turn evil and do and say some mean things that ya can`t remember the next day. Nice poem sonjes. Thank you for the read |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Yah, Jose has had my head in the toilet a few times!!! This peice is full of raw emotion...I've been here before!!! Maybe it's time to find a new drinking partner!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Oops! I can't type today. It is supposed to be "Blame" of course. Silly me! Yes, tequila will always do it. Thanks, SEA, and maybe someday you will. RuffRyder- what doesn't "kill us" will make us stronger, I hope. Devina- Maybe Jose is not such a good friend after all and I do need to find a new drinking partner. Better yet, lay off the bad stuff. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The title of this caught my eye, and then your words held me here. I like intense poetry, and I like this very much. Looking forward to reading more...Blame it on tequila? I have even blamed it on the moon. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yea!! I found another sonjes poem..  this is great...so you have a mean little drinking temper huh? LOL well I drink the hard stuff...RASBERRY ICED TEA..lol..im a major lightweight LOL later gator  Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... Jackson Browne *I miss you baby... I love you...always. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Interesting poem, liked alot. Parker |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very clever, witty and well written. Excellent work |
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bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
...I've always heard Jack and Jim are great drinking partners.....not that I'd ever KNOW, of course...*looks away and whistles innocently*...LOL! Nice poem! Bobbycat =^..^= ~~Blessed Be!~~ |
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