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Blame it on the Tequila

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sonjes
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0 posted 03-01-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for sonjes

When my tongue gets loose
The accusations fly.
Tears shed forth and vile words
Spew from my mouth.
My soul is ripped apart;
I fall to my knees
Heedless of the strangers' stares.
Jose has got a hold of me
Controlling my thoughts, actions, words.
I scream and curse your name
Between declarations of undying love.
I tear at my hair,pound my fists;
Trying to get you to see
The madness and confusion
Raging inside my head.
You retreat, you Coward!
Unable to face my raw emotions.
Tomorrow will come with no regrets.
I can blame it on the tequila.
Can you?


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with you


1 posted 03-01-2000 05:44 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Sonjes~ Wow.... I can blame a heck of a lot on tequila but nothing like this! Great poem. -SEA
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2 posted 03-01-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

Tequila is to killya.
That stuff can make even the kindest person turn evil and do and say some mean things that ya can`t remember the next day.
Nice poem sonjes.
Thank you for the read
devina
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3 posted 03-01-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Yah, Jose has had my head in the toilet a few times!!!

This peice is full of raw emotion...I've been here before!!! Maybe it's time to find a new drinking partner!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
sonjes
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4 posted 03-01-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

Oops! I can't type today.  It is supposed to be "Blame" of course. Silly me!  Yes, tequila will always do it.
Thanks, SEA, and maybe someday you will.
RuffRyder- what doesn't "kill us" will make us stronger, I hope.
Devina- Maybe Jose is not such a good friend after all and I do need to find a new drinking partner.  Better yet, lay off the bad stuff.  
serenity blaze
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5 posted 03-01-2000 08:08 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

The title of this caught my eye, and then your words held me here.  I like intense
poetry, and I like this very much.  Looking
forward to reading more...Blame it on tequila?  I have even blamed it on the moon.
Janet Marie
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6 posted 03-01-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

yea!! I found another sonjes poem..
this is great...so you have a mean little drinking temper huh?  LOL
well I drink the hard stuff...RASBERRY ICED TEA..lol..im a major lightweight  LOL
later gator

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be...
Jackson Browne
*I miss you baby...
I love you...always.

Parker
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... the old black rum


7 posted 03-01-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Interesting poem, liked alot.

Parker
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8 posted 03-01-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Very clever, witty and well written. Excellent work  
bobbycat
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9 posted 03-01-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

...I've always heard Jack and Jim are great drinking partners.....not that I'd ever KNOW, of course...*looks away and whistles innocently*...LOL!  Nice poem!  

Bobbycat =^..^=


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