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Priceless as Trust

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Martie
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Priceless as Trust


This heart that is
priceless as trust

has pages that
press fragile

with weight
heavy with your evasion.

Open this book
the words scream

read lines
of angry tear.

My flutter of patience
is rupturing

for burning
with your blossoms.

I    not tethered
will ash and fly

turn on winged
rainbow truth

will love in starlight
and dance each dance

while you loose face
in this hollow meaning

and the one you hurt
is you.
© Copyright 2000 Martie Odell-Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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<------Over There------>


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Very nice read Martie.
I can feel your emotions thru the writing.
Thank you for the read  
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Martie, I liked the format of this piece, and the message.

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Martie~
You've captured a message
replete with wisdom.
I just love the formatting
that goes on in your mind.
~*Marge*


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Evasion is never the answer... it's just the desert wind that sucks the life from hope. This is beautiful, Martie... and touched me deeply.
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as priceless as trust is so too is it's fragility - as you know so well -
beautifully written Martie
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