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haiku 006

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Beki
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0 posted 03-01-2000 12:37 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beki

The green Pacific
goes gray with gathering clouds -
heralds this night's storm.

© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Skyfyre
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1 posted 03-01-2000 12:39 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Don't know much about haiku, but I'll not argue with an image that speaks volumes in a mere three lines.  Powerful ...

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Gemini
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2 posted 03-01-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Beki-Beautiful imagery.
Beki
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3 posted 03-01-2000 02:20 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Thanks Kess. I am something of an expert on this form, would be glad to email you about it  

Gemini you snuck in while I was posting to kess LOL  thanks for reading  

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Denise
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4 posted 03-02-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beki, your haikus are always wonderful! More, More!!  

Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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Beki....your haiku always astounds me  
sweetcollege_girl
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6 posted 03-02-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for sweetcollege_girl   Email sweetcollege_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sweetcollege_girl

I rarely see any Haiku poems in here, but I certainly will be looking for it!  

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

Parker
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Beki, I haven't done any haiku since grade 8, so I will post some today. I don't fully understand the point of haiku but anyway.... I like yours.

Parker
 
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