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romeo romeo, wherefore are thou?

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Corazon
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0 posted 03-01-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corazon

lol ok, here's one completely off the wall from what I usually post....its about time for a smile    
and lol, ok I just reread and maybe its not a smile, I was sorta mad when I wrote it, but I can smile now....does that count?  


are you talking to the pretty one
while I am at work
are you telling her the
same I love your eyes, your smile
your etc…line you used on me?

Or is your arm draped softly
over the shy one's shoulder
befriending her with your
comfortable grace and charm
softly putting her at ease?

Are you winking and grinning
as you pass the naughty ones,
the ones that see right through you
so you don't have
to hide who you really are?

And did you put my name
under S in your little black book?
I must have looked like the kind
who would fall for your sincerity.




[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 03-01-2000).]
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 03-01-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh...this one likes me very much.....I can relate well to it  
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2 posted 03-01-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

It counts... it counts! LOL And I love this! *S*
Meadowmuse
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3 posted 03-01-2000 12:06 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"S" for "sincerity" AND "sarcasm"! Good writing!

~ Claire
devina
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4 posted 03-01-2000 12:44 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I loved this...yep, brought a smile to my face this morning!!! You're too much hun...

I think I usually fall under M- for mislead!!!! Your sarcasm isn't lost on me...but that shows strength, and I do adore this peice of work!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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5 posted 03-01-2000 01:03 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

"Deny thy father and refuse thy name"
or should it be. . .
"Deny my love and stop playing games?"
HEY!!
That's pretty good. . .
Corazon. . .I think that you may have opened up a poem from me based on this poem and your title. . .

I really liked this one. . . and yes, I think that I can definitly color you "sarcastic"!


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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Corazon
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6 posted 03-01-2000 02:16 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

thanks all, funny how sarcasm can hold back the tears...must be a dam(n) of some sort...sigh

sven, will look for your poem...great lines
JamesMichael
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7 posted 03-01-2000 03:09 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You made me laugh corazon.  Made me think about my friend Jesse.   I call him JesseNova the Hawaiian Cassanova.  He has so many numbers in his little black book and I always wonder which one is his honey this week.  James
RainbowGirl
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8 posted 03-01-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

You made me smile...  

I heard about an analogy of women and how they love and it stuck with me...this is how it went...

Imagine a fish tank full of water but with a tiny drip leaking...all that water resembles the love for our man...when there is nothing but that tiny drop left, the love is still the same as the full tank but once that last drop has gone, so are we...

I guess we women have a greater capacity for love and understanding...men hear facts, we give love until the final drop..  

Btw, I think S should be for SOB in your case...

HUSG

 I dropped a tear in the ocean
when they find it,I will stop loving you...


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passing shadows
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9 posted 03-02-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

WHOO HOO! Romeos are everywhere! I had one too...Thanks for sharing this one!  

 ~shadows dance by the light within~


HelmutB
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10 posted 03-02-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Sometimes tears are the best weapon against pain. I found so many times
Well written your poem

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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