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Poeminister
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25 posted 03-02-2000 01:36 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

Hoot,

This an emotionally ironic poem, straight forward and nicely written.

 "...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Edgar Allan Poe (from Serenade)


Tara Simms
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26 posted 03-02-2000 04:24 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Ouch! I felt that slap at the end.  I hope "he" does too.
Andrew Scott
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27 posted 03-02-2000 05:24 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

OWWW! A finer point could not be made.  Excellent writing Lady Hoot.  You'll forgive me if I've missed so many of your latest postings.  Been playing around in the 'Stute don't cha know.  I hope all is well with you these days. As always, I bow to you and yours.
HelmutB
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28 posted 03-02-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Short, sweet and at the end to the point.
I guess you said it clearly.
Well done
Hugs and love

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

hoot_owl_rn
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29 posted 03-03-2000 06:28 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Once more...thank you everyone for reading my work and always for the kind and generous comments you make  
Nan
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30 posted 03-03-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

The real world certainly does throw us some curves, doesn't it?... Nicely done, hoot..
Parker
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Hoot, I must agree with everybody else, a gem of a poem, and a great twist.

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