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Always tomorrow

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vandana
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0 posted 03-01-2000 10:50 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

There'll be tomorrow,
Don't fall apart,
Life is short,
Sometimes you don't get enough
what you want in life,
but don't give it up,
you have to live for your life,
Life is sweet,
But don't fall apart,
Look right ahead,
There will be tomorrow for you and me,
There will be no sorrow for us,
So don't give up
the hope you've inside your heart,
There's a furture right ahead,
so look up at sky,
you'll see a tomorrow,
will be there for us,
If the years rolls by,
If each petal falls down,
but doon't look behind,
You can walk into that road,
where you can find hearts
where you can achive goals,
So don't fall apart,
There's always tomorrow,

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Parker
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1 posted 03-01-2000 11:13 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

vandana, great message... I had just read tulips poem and yours seems like the reply I should have put.

Parker
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 03-01-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This is a very nice piece!  Any yes, "There's always tomorrow"
Well spoken.  You seem to have a grasp of the important things.
Aimster
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3 posted 03-01-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Vandana

this is lovely...sorta contrasts against a poem i just wrote entitled "if tomorrow never comes" i like yours better...keep up there great work. i will be on the look out for some more of your work  

take care, amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 03-01-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

An important message we all should remember  
SEA
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5 posted 03-01-2000 11:53 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Vandana~ very uplifting! Enjoyed this!  -SEA
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 03-01-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Vandana,
Excellent content in this poem. I love the messages written here. Keep up the good work
Love ya
LIz
Mike
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7 posted 03-02-2000 12:08 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice Vandana...  this is one of my favorites of your poems.
Severn
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8 posted 03-02-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Hey Vandana - wonderful!
Great message...



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
sonjes
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9 posted 03-02-2000 07:29 AM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

You are right, there is always tomorrow.  I like to think I always have today.  Feel this one, vandana.  Right down to my toes.  Hope and prayer, that is what we all definitely have.  Love the message here too.

 Chinese fortune cookie say:
There are many unexpected & thrilling surprises in store for you.
JamesMichael
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10 posted 03-02-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Yes there is always tomorrow and I hold on to that hope.   As you say there is a future right ahead.   Nice writing.   James
Denise
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11 posted 03-02-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so full of hope! I love it, Vandana!  

Denise
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