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Always tomorrow
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Always tomorrow |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
There'll be tomorrow, Don't fall apart, Life is short, Sometimes you don't get enough what you want in life, but don't give it up, you have to live for your life, Life is sweet, But don't fall apart, Look right ahead, There will be tomorrow for you and me, There will be no sorrow for us, So don't give up the hope you've inside your heart, There's a furture right ahead, so look up at sky, you'll see a tomorrow, will be there for us, If the years rolls by, If each petal falls down, but doon't look behind, You can walk into that road, where you can find hearts where you can achive goals, So don't fall apart, There's always tomorrow, |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
vandana, great message... I had just read tulips poem and yours seems like the reply I should have put. Parker |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
This is a very nice piece! Any yes, "There's always tomorrow" Well spoken. You seem to have a grasp of the important things. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Vandana this is lovely...sorta contrasts against a poem i just wrote entitled "if tomorrow never comes" i like yours better...keep up there great work. i will be on the look out for some more of your work  take care, amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
An important message we all should remember |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana~ very uplifting! Enjoyed this! -SEA |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Vandana, Excellent content in this poem. I love the messages written here. Keep up the good work Love ya LIz |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice Vandana... this is one of my favorites of your poems. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey Vandana - wonderful! Great message... 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
You are right, there is always tomorrow. I like to think I always have today. Feel this one, vandana. Right down to my toes. Hope and prayer, that is what we all definitely have. Love the message here too. Chinese fortune cookie say: There are many unexpected & thrilling surprises in store for you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes there is always tomorrow and I hold on to that hope. As you say there is a future right ahead. Nice writing. James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so full of hope! I love it, Vandana! Denise |
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