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Crystal Chimes

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Mike
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0 posted 03-01-2000 10:49 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

Forgotten times of crystal chimes,
...soft hush of spring's first rain,
Paths not taken, now forsaken,
...sweet sorrows without pain,
As wisps of air, tease ebon hair,
...rememberance of thee,
Of flowing streams and flowered dreams,
...of love not meant to be,
Forevermore, means nevermore,
...forever elfin grace,
Upon a star I gaze afar,
...upon an angel's face,
Forgotten times of crystal chimes,
...awakened from their sleep,
For in mine heart, shall never part,
...forever will thee keep.
© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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1 posted 03-01-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Oh my, but this is lovely Mike. Lovely...

~ Claire
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2 posted 03-01-2000 11:45 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice poem,Mike!!!!!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 03-01-2000 11:52 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Forgotten chimes
They toll for thee
Here beside
The crystal sea
Where memories
Of another time
Grace the chamber
Of my mind

Smiles...well hello Mike...like your poem, could you tell  
Skyfyre
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4 posted 03-01-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

**sigh**

Simply too lovely.  I need a tissue.

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Martie
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5 posted 03-01-2000 01:25 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

You write with eloquence and charm, my friend.  Lovely verse sir Tim.
Michael
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6 posted 03-01-2000 04:18 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Mesmerizing...simply exquisite.  Lovely rhyme scheme and equally beautiful if melancholy message.


michael

Mike
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7 posted 03-01-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Thank you all so much for your gracious comments.  Has been a bit of a melancholy day.
Nan
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8 posted 03-02-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

When melancholia makes you frown
Look deep within your soul
For HappiNess lies there deep down
Just takes a slight cajole

Don't let your burdens callous thee
Take hold of them instead
Just smile within and you shall see
You'll cheer your troubled head...

Really nice work, my friend..
 
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