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From A Little Distance!

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-01-2000 08:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

From A Little Distance!


From a little distance
Our eyes meet,I try
To contain the excitement
From within.
From a little distance
I adore you! I want you!
But it's not enough to
Make it through the day.
This glass wall
Beholds the lust!
The mist of
Passionate breath!
The prints of
Sweated  palms!
The stare of
Hungry eyes
The tremble of
Quivering thighs
And
My desperate sighs!


Dark Angel
2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 03-01-2000 08:17 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Excellent expression of feelings here, I enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.
January Flowers
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2 posted 03-01-2000 08:27 AM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Whoa!  Was this poem supposed to have THAT kind of affect on me?  LOL!  This is great...neat how words can just speak so clearly of a moment, of a feeling.  
Meadowmuse
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Yikes!!


(Good writing!)  

~ Claire
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 03-01-2000 11:56 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Ah...just standing back a bit and appreciating this wonderful, passionate piece  
Martie
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5 posted 03-01-2000 02:06 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Hey, your steaming up my computer screen...enjoyed the poem.
WhtDove
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Sweaty palms on the glass eh DA?  haha, good line, passionate poem my friend  
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7 posted 03-01-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Seems the distance is not close enough! Good poem...now I need some ice water!  
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Passion indeed my friend - wow!!

K

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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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9 posted 03-02-2000 01:04 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~


Well ..... maybe it's really


Got my lights flashing ....  


~*Marge*~  



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JamesMichael
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I like this very much.     James
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11 posted 03-02-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Careful sweetheart, those flames can get mighty hot..

HUSG

 I dropped a tear in the ocean
when it is found, I will stop loving you...
Dark Angel
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Lost Dreamer, thanks for your lovely comment and thanks for taking the time to read.  
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JF,so glad you enjoyed it hehe Thank you!  
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Meadowmuse, YIKES!!! Loved your reply, thank you!!  
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Ruth Honey, thanks so much for your lovely reply!  
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Martie, hehehe that makes you and me both  
thanks for your lovely reply.  
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Hey Angel girl!!! yup sweaty hands on the glass gives me more cleaning to do!! hehe Thanks honey!  
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Ya got it Sharon! thanks for your lovely reply!  
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Sweet Butterfly, glad you enjoyed!   thank you!
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Marge, it is cool and it's definately HOT! and it has my lights flashing too!!! Thanks for your very KEWL!! reply!  
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James, glad you liked!! thank you.  
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RianbowGirl, yeah they can get mighty hot, but it's fun putting them out *G* Thanks Gorgeous!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




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tracie66
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13 posted 03-03-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

this is fabulous, a most enjoyable piece

from a little distance I see you from afar
you're that never ending light forming that bright new star
from a little distance do you see me to
making a little difference, helping our live's to renew


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
Denise
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Very passionate! Great writing, DA!!

Denise
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