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Awakening

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paulsm
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0 posted 03-01-2000 04:44 AM       View Profile for paulsm   Email paulsm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paulsm

This poem was written by the love of my life, And she thinks she's LUCKY !!. Thankyou Honey XXXOOO

As I sit in contemplation of my life before we met.
I can only truly marvel at the time that we have spent,
I moves me beyond thought or words, to tell you how I feel
And I have to keep on blinking to make sure it is real.
~
I feel like sleeping beauty who has slept her life away,
And woken with surprise as the darkness turns to day,
The world looks somewhat different from perceptions of before,
And it beckons me inviting, to taste lifeís simple store.
~
Like a billowing cloud of thunder as it keeps the rain at bay,
My world of grey and pallor have gone and moved away,
And when the grey clouds part and the sun comes shining through
I look up towards the rays of light and feel like Iím renewed.
~
What good deed have I done to be blessed with such as you,
A person soft and gentle with a heart thatís fair and true,
Youíve shown me love and happiness, a joy beyond compare,
Dreams like these Iíd locked away and never hoped to share.
~
My heart swells deep within me and awakens from its sleep,
And it warms to who and what you are and that I want to keep,
A new hope soars within my heart that all is not a dream,
Thereís sunlight in my life now, it surrounds me in itís beam.
~
As a butterfly unfolds and spreads itís wings to let them dry,
I feel that Iíve come home and canít help but heave a sigh
I thought that I had lost the plot of lifeís simplistic pleasures,
But I know itís all around me in all of natures treasures.
~
So hold me in your arms, when Iím weak and canít see through,
Be my eyes and tell me, what the world looks like to you,
Your words will lead me on, to a better, brighter place,
Iíll see it written in your eyes and etched across your face.
~
An when my life is through and I run my final race,
Iíll smile a blissful smile as I stare into your face,
ĎCause I know youíll always be there, in this life and the next,
I want to tell you always, you are the very best.

Linda Hamilton 28/2/00




 Slow Down, stop to smell the roses and stroll through the garden of life, it will be a more pleasurable experience.

I think of you always Honey XXXOOO.
© Copyright 2000 Paul Middleton - All Rights Reserved
paulsm
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1 posted 03-01-2000 05:29 AM       View Profile for paulsm   Email paulsm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paulsm

My awakening

I too contemplate,
My life before we met,
And sit in wondrous awe,
Of path that we have set.
~
I understand your struggle,
To express whatís in your heart,
I often have to pinch myself,
Incase this dream departs.
~
You are my sleeping beauty,
With hair thatís golden spun,
Eyes of blue green passion,
You are my rising sun.
~
You have no want of deeds,
To feel the power of love,
For I feel that you deserve it,
This gift from up above.
~
So awaken from your sleep,
For this is not a dream,
Bath your self in happiness,
In sunlightís golden beam.
~
Spread your wings and fly,
See the beauty all around,
Enjoy simplistic pleasures,
For thereís many to be found.
~
Iíll hold you in my arms,
When youíre weak and youíre alarmed,
Fear not for my absence,
For this heartís been truly charmed.
~
You can be my rising sun,
And I will be your sight,
Weíll sample all that life can give,
Until our final night.

Paul Middleton 1/3/00


 Slow Down, stop to smell the roses and stroll through the garden of life, it will be a more pleasurable experience.

I think of you always Honey XXXOOO.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 03-01-2000 05:32 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A lovely poem and lovely beauty when two soulmates share their love.   James
Michael
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3 posted 03-01-2000 06:12 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Paul,
   This is exquisite.  Linda's and equally your reply.  Love has a way of bringing forth the most beautiful works.  These poems are perfect compliments of each other as I am sure you and Linda are.  My heart smiles to even know such love can exist.  Never take this blessing for granted.

Michael
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4 posted 03-01-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

What beautiful words of shared love.
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