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4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
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0 posted 2000-03-01 02:29 AM


i am a woman
i have the hips and the waist
i have the infamous hourglass figure
i have breasts and all the rest

i am a woman
i may not be built like a supermodel
i'm not obese or fat
but i do have bumps and lumps

i am a woman
my face is not that of a porcelin dolls
but it is uniquely mine
my smile extends a mile

i am a woman
i'm not the most attractive
but i am the most fortunate
i have found above all.....love



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RufffRyder
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since 2000-02-25
Posts 143
<------Over There------>
1 posted 2000-03-01 03:02 AM


4eva~nice job here.
Im going to take a wild guess here ok?
Your a woman right
Just kiddin.
Thank you for the read

Michael
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2 posted 2000-03-01 03:11 AM


If you have love, you have everything.  Not much more one could ask for.

Michael

January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 209
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3 posted 2000-03-01 09:06 AM


Blessed are those who find love and keep it!  Welcome to Passions, 4eva...I bet you're gonna love it here!
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
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4 posted 2000-03-01 09:10 AM




Creative poem, it was the title that caught my eye which led me to read your poem.  I am happy that you have found love, once you have that everything falls into place.
The many feelings expressed in your poem is what many women feel, which draws your read in more. I related to your poem very much so.  I look forward to reading more pieces by you.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2000-03-01 09:30 AM


~4Eva~

Excellent!! *Cheering*   I gotta agree with Melissa on this one...the title is what originally caught my eye. Had me intrigued. The piece itself is wonderful. Thanks so much for reminding me how good it is to be a woman. I am so happy you have love in your life. take care and god bless.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
6 posted 2000-03-01 11:16 AM


Very nice piece.  I liked your expression and the confidence that came out.
I was caught by the title as well.  Good work.

Martie
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7 posted 2000-03-01 01:51 PM


A woman with love is rich indeed.
Miss.Queeny
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 22

8 posted 2000-03-01 02:33 PM


' I have lips, hips, tits...I am the power of a woman. I know exactly who I am, what I am, and the wrath I bring. '

4eva...good poem, I completely agree. Well done.

Love, Peace and Apathy...MISS.Q xxx

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
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Limbo
9 posted 2000-03-01 07:56 PM


very grrovy poem 4eva. I like it alot.  

~AF~

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
10 posted 2000-03-01 08:45 PM


You've got love?
Hang on to it
Good poem
Liz

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
11 posted 2000-03-01 09:13 PM


You are woman, hear you roar. Great poem.

Parker

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