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4eva_at_heart
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0 posted 03-01-2000 02:29 AM       View Profile for 4eva_at_heart   Email 4eva_at_heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for 4eva_at_heart

i am a woman
i have the hips and the waist
i have the infamous hourglass figure
i have breasts and all the rest

i am a woman
i may not be built like a supermodel
i'm not obese or fat
but i do have bumps and lumps

i am a woman
my face is not that of a porcelin dolls
but it is uniquely mine
my smile extends a mile

i am a woman
i'm not the most attractive
but i am the most fortunate
i have found above all.....love


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RufffRyder
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<------Over There------>


1 posted 03-01-2000 03:02 AM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

4eva~nice job here.
Im going to take a wild guess here ok?
Your a woman right
Just kiddin.
Thank you for the read
Michael
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2 posted 03-01-2000 03:11 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

If you have love, you have everything.  Not much more one could ask for.

Michael
January Flowers
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3 posted 03-01-2000 09:06 AM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Blessed are those who find love and keep it!  Welcome to Passions, 4eva...I bet you're gonna love it here!
Honeybee
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4 posted 03-01-2000 09:10 AM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee



Creative poem, it was the title that caught my eye which led me to read your poem.  I am happy that you have found love, once you have that everything falls into place.
The many feelings expressed in your poem is what many women feel, which draws your read in more. I related to your poem very much so.  I look forward to reading more pieces by you.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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5 posted 03-01-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~4Eva~

Excellent!! *Cheering*   I gotta agree with Melissa on this one...the title is what originally caught my eye. Had me intrigued. The piece itself is wonderful. Thanks so much for reminding me how good it is to be a woman. I am so happy you have love in your life. take care and god bless.

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 03-01-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Very nice piece.  I liked your expression and the confidence that came out.
I was caught by the title as well.  Good work.
Martie
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7 posted 03-01-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

A woman with love is rich indeed.
Miss.Queeny
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8 posted 03-01-2000 02:33 PM       View Profile for Miss.Queeny   Email Miss.Queeny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss.Queeny

' I have lips, hips, tits...I am the power of a woman. I know exactly who I am, what I am, and the wrath I bring. '

4eva...good poem, I completely agree. Well done.

Love, Peace and Apathy...MISS.Q xxx
anonymousfemale
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9 posted 03-01-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

very grrovy poem 4eva. I like it alot.  

~AF~
Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 03-01-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You've got love?
Hang on to it
Good poem
Liz
Parker
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... the old black rum


11 posted 03-01-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

You are woman, hear you roar. Great poem.

Parker
 
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