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Lynn
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0 posted 02-29-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn


Do not think I'm naive,
Just because I'm sixteen.
I've been down roads rough,
I live a life that's tough.

You can't come in,
I won't let  enter.
There's no way in my life,
That you could be the center.

Do not think I'm naive,
And offer me your sleeve.
For when my tears start falling,
You won't be the one I'm calling.

I've seen your acts of hate,
That leave young souls in despair.
I've seen you be so nice,
The next moment you don't care.

So do not think I'm naive,
It's time for me to leave.
Now think about the words I spoke,
Take them serious, they're no joke.  


 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
RufffRyder
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1 posted 02-29-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

You sure show alot of emotions in this one.
Being an old guy I sometimes forget what it was like to be sixteen and how tough the world seem to be.
Nice job with the wording here Lynn
serenity blaze
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2 posted 02-29-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Lynn, this was a bit painful for me.  I am
well, WELL PAST 16, but I am still naive.
And I recognize the protective armour all
too well.  But I  cannot deny the essential
goodness of people, even thru all the pain.
Heartfelt, strong, and leaves me knowing
that you will make it.  HUGS.
Denise
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3 posted 02-29-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very good, Lynn! You have a good head on your shoulders!  

Denise
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