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Open Poetry #6

I don't

Spartacus
Junior Member

since 1999-09-27

Posts 13

0 posted 2000-02-29 06:34 PM

I don't know how to say,
All the things I feel,
I do know for certain,
That these feelings are real,

I don't want to go to fast,
I can't scare you away,
My goal is to show you,
That I need you to stay,

I don't want to be foolish,
But I'm scared to let you know,
My feelings are so strong,
And they continue to grow,

I don't want to lose you,
Even though you're not mine,
I'm asking for your heart,
All I need is a sign,

I don't want my love,
To be felt all in vain,
Just tell me you love me,
Then whisper my name.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2000-02-29 07:52 PM

This is lovely! Your emotions are poured into this wonderful poem. good job..

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-02-29 07:55 PM

This is sweet and pure. Just lovely. Thanx.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-02-29 09:46 PM

This is beautiful, Spartacus! Very beautiful!

Denise

RufffRyder
Member

since 2000-02-25

Posts 143
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4 posted 2000-02-29 09:55 PM

Excellent job here with your feelings,wording and flow

I would like to offer some advice on this one but I dont think that I qualify for that job ...lol
Take care and good luck Spartacus

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