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Spartacus
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0 posted 02-29-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Spartacus   Email Spartacus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spartacus

I don't know how to say,
All the things I feel,
I do know for certain,
That these feelings are real,

I don't want to go to fast,
I can't scare you away,
My goal is to show you,
That I need you to stay,

I don't want to be foolish,
But I'm scared to let you know,
My feelings are so strong,
And they continue to grow,

I don't want to lose you,
Even though you're not mine,
I'm asking for your heart,
All I need is a sign,

I don't want my love,
To be felt all in vain,
Just tell me you love me,
Then whisper my name.

© Copyright 2000 Spartacus - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 02-29-2000 07:52 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is lovely! Your emotions are poured into this wonderful poem. good job..  
serenity blaze
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2 posted 02-29-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is sweet and pure.  Just lovely.  Thanx.
Denise
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3 posted 02-29-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Spartacus! Very beautiful!

Denise
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Excellent job here with your feelings,wording and flow
I would like to offer some advice on this one but I dont think that I qualify for that job ...lol
Take care and good luck Spartacus
 
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