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Garrett's Poem

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Beki
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0 posted 02-29-2000 04:37 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beki

Garrett's Poem

Now that you are in my circle,
wholly a part of my design,
I must decide just where to place you,
your perfect fit into my life.

Perhaps you are my kindred spirit,
he who dances through my sleep
whose ready wit and poetry
determine which words I should keep.

Could you be my sanctuary,
a candle in my darkest need;
that place I run to when I fail,
where all my pathways seem to lead?

might you be my warrior poet,
that phantom lover of my dreams?
A man whose wisdom and whose strength
defeats each obstacle that gleams?

or are you most a simple friend,
a smile and laughter on my way?
I would be blessed to take your hand
if so, it is enough today.

© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Jester59701
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1 posted 02-29-2000 04:54 PM       View Profile for Jester59701   Email Jester59701   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jester59701

Very nice Beki, Garrett's lucky to be part of your circle
RufffRyder
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<------Over There------>


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Sounds like someone is a very lucky man.
I hope that he`s able to see this.
Thank you for the Read Beki
Beki
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3 posted 02-29-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Thanks Jester and Ryder. Truth is Garrett is just a young (19) internet friend from another site who challenged me to "write a poem for him right now", AS WE WERE SPEAKING. This was the result.
Parker
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... the old black rum


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Beki, I really loved this, friendship doesn't stop with young age thats sure.

Parker
 
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