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On a rainy day(written by my 9 yr. old daughter)
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On a rainy day(written by my 9 yr. old daughter) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I was tired on a rainy day in my Mom's awaiting arms I went to lay I sat by the fire on a rainy day my Mom and I talked I didn't have much to say We went to the store on a rainy day I was surprised it was still raining it's almost May! I sat, on a rainy day while I listened to my Dad talk about the bay I'm ending my poem on a rainy day someone just read it I wonder what they'll say? -Jezzika- |
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jascanvey Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130England |
Hi Jezzika, I see you have your mothers' talent for poetry. This is really sweet, brought back memories of cuddling up with my mum when it rained. Hope to see more of your work!  ((hugs)) All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is great, Jezzika! Keep up the good work!  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jascanvey~ Thank you, I like writting. I'll try to write more Suthern~Thank you, I'll try my best. -Jezzika- (Thank you for responding. This was her first "real" poem. I'm very proud.  She is very excited.-SEA) |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Jezzika~you have wrirren a beautiful poem about a rainy day here. Almost as beautiful as you name  Keep writing and I`ll keep reading. Bye Bye Jezzika |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RufffRyder~Thank you for reading my poem and writting to me. Thank you, I like my name too,but some people call me Jessica and I don't like that.You have to say the zzzzzz! -Jezzika |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Jezzika, your poem is wonderful! Rainy days are great for cuddling up with your mom and just hanging out, whether you talk or not. You keep writing, okay? I really like your style!  Claire |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Meadowmuse~ Thank you! I'll keep writting, I promise! -Jezzika |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Jezzika! You seem to have inherited your Mommy's talent for writing! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jezzika~ A poem as pretty as this deserves a bouquet for a pretty girl.  I like your 'On A Rainy Day'. Thank you for sharing it with me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I do not have flowers that I can share I do not have rings for you to wear I do not have words that could express Your poem and your love to mom is a bless If rain or shine you're doing fine Your poem is such sweet divine Because it shows what love can do When you say to someone "I love you" Beautiful your poem The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Denise~ Thank you,Mom taught me how to write. Marge~ thank you for the flowers!How do you do that on the computer? HelmutB~thank you for the pretty poem. -Jezzika- [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Well written by your daugther.I like it. |
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