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On a rainy day(written by my 9 yr. old daughter)

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I was tired
on a rainy day
in my Mom's awaiting arms
I went to lay

I sat by the fire
on a rainy day
my Mom and I talked
I didn't have much to say

We went to the store
on a rainy day
I was surprised it was still raining
it's almost May!

I sat,
on a rainy day
while I listened to my Dad
talk about the bay

I'm ending my poem
on a rainy day
someone just read it
I wonder what they'll say?
-Jezzika-
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1 posted 02-29-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Hi Jezzika, I see you have your mothers' talent for poetry. This is really sweet, brought back memories of cuddling up with my mum when it rained. Hope to see more of your work!    
((hugs))

 All of my life I've been searching for the words to say how I feel........ - Phil Collins.
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2 posted 02-29-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is great, Jezzika! Keep up the good work!  
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3 posted 02-29-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Jascanvey~ Thank you, I like writting. I'll try to write more

Suthern~Thank you, I'll try my best.
-Jezzika-

(Thank you for responding. This was her first "real" poem. I'm very proud. She is very excited.-SEA)
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Jezzika~you have wrirren a beautiful poem about a rainy day here.
Almost as beautiful as you name
Keep writing and I`ll keep reading.
Bye Bye Jezzika
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RufffRyder~Thank you for reading my poem and writting to me. Thank you, I like my name too,but some people call me Jessica and I don't like that.You have to say the zzzzzz! -Jezzika
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Jezzika, your poem is wonderful! Rainy days are great for cuddling up with your mom and just hanging out, whether you talk or not. You keep writing, okay? I really like your style!

Dear LadyClaire

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Meadowmuse~ Thank you! I'll keep writting, I promise! -Jezzika
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This is great, Jezzika! You seem to have inherited your Mommy's talent for writing!

Denise
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Jezzika~
A poem as pretty as this deserves
a bouquet for a pretty girl.

I like your 'On A Rainy Day'.    
Thank you for sharing it with me.
~*Marge*~


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I do not have flowers that I can share
I do not have rings for you to wear
I do not have words that could express
Your poem and your love to mom is a bless
If rain or shine you're doing fine
Your poem is such sweet divine
Because it shows what love can do
When you say to someone "I love you"

Beautiful your poem


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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Denise~ Thank you,Mom taught me how to write.  

Marge~ thank you for the flowers!How do you do that on the computer?  

HelmutB~thank you for the pretty poem.  
-Jezzika-

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 03-01-2000).]
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Well written by your daugther.I like it.
 
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