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She Haunts Me

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-29-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Why canít I seem to describe her
When her vision controls my every thought
There seems to be no words worthy
Of her, whom I found but never sought
I wonder if she even sees me
When she sees me everyday
Is this really who I am with her
If not, what could I possibly say
To tell her, only to tell her
That she brings me joy in my life
With her sweet voice and knowing smile
Wild and free spirit, natureís wife

She haunts me because I cannot have her
If only she knew that I loved her

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1 posted 02-29-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

JML~ maybe you should tell her..... this is so beautiful. -SEA
Janet Marie
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2 posted 02-29-2000 03:37 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Why canít I seem to describe her
When her vision controls my every thought
There seems to be no words worthy
Of her, whom I found but never sought...

when I saw the title I was afraid this one was about me  LOL  oh no then it would have been "she stalks me"...

anyway... you know I love these beautiful, sweet love poems... give this to her...then she will know!!
stalking on....JM

 You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name
And know my love and my desperation were one and the same...
Baby it's alright...
Take this pain and all this sadness
It's alright
Take this rain
You're going to be free...
Jackson Browne
*I love you baby*


PoeticKnight
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3 posted 02-29-2000 03:48 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Ahh....but you know JM, that this was written a long, long time ago in a galxy far, far away. LOL And back then, i kept my distance, wrapped in shyness.
KathieO
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4 posted 02-29-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for KathieO   Email KathieO   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KathieO

Very good stuff!! Not sure if it was "Her" that was haunting you...or your internal conflict about actually telling her.

I enjoyed this one.  Kathie
hoot_owl_rn
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JML...so hauntingly sad  
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6 posted 02-29-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

JML,
This is beautiful, as always...
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