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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
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New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-29 02:02 PM


Why can’t I seem to describe her
When her vision controls my every thought
There seems to be no words worthy
Of her, whom I found but never sought
I wonder if she even sees me
When she sees me everyday
Is this really who I am with her
If not, what could I possibly say
To tell her, only to tell her
That she brings me joy in my life
With her sweet voice and knowing smile
Wild and free spirit, nature’s wife

She haunts me because I cannot have her
If only she knew that I loved her


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1 posted 2000-02-29 02:40 PM


JML~ maybe you should tell her..... this is so beautiful. -SEA
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-02-29 03:37 PM


Why can’t I seem to describe her
When her vision controls my every thought
There seems to be no words worthy
Of her, whom I found but never sought...

when I saw the title I was afraid this one was about me  LOL  oh no then it would have been "she stalks me"...

anyway... you know I love these beautiful, sweet love poems... give this to her...then she will know!!
stalking on....JM

 You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name
And know my love and my desperation were one and the same...
Baby it's alright...
Take this pain and all this sadness
It's alright
Take this rain
You're going to be free...
Jackson Browne
*I love you baby*



PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA
3 posted 2000-02-29 03:48 PM


Ahh....but you know JM, that this was written a long, long time ago in a galxy far, far away. LOL And back then, i kept my distance, wrapped in shyness.
KathieO
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 14
Canada
4 posted 2000-02-29 04:57 PM


Very good stuff!! Not sure if it was "Her" that was haunting you...or your internal conflict about actually telling her.

I enjoyed this one.  Kathie

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-02-29 09:01 PM


JML...so hauntingly sad  
tulip
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6 posted 2000-02-29 09:23 PM


JML,
This is beautiful, as always...

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