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Will you just let me be....

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The Jackal
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0 posted 02-29-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

why are you following me
what do you want with me
i've caved in to obscurity
isnt that enough
to just let me be
crucified by the minute
love my cross
there is no limit
to all my humanity lost..
© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
childomine
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1 posted 02-29-2000 01:44 PM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

Beautifully written and terribly sad.
Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 03-24-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This is way to good to be buried with only 1 response  
Denise
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3 posted 03-24-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is intense, Jackal. Well written!

Denise
wayoutwalt
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4 posted 03-24-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

this is very good yuh
tracie66
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5 posted 03-25-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

This is soo sad jackal
HUGS
tracie


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Alwye
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In the space between moments


6 posted 03-25-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Ah, I can relate to this extremely well.  Deeply sad and moving work.

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~


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