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The Jackal
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0 posted 2000-02-29 01:37 PM


why are you following me
what do you want with me
i've caved in to obscurity
isnt that enough
to just let me be
crucified by the minute
love my cross
there is no limit
to all my humanity lost..

© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
childomine
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1 posted 2000-02-29 01:44 PM


Beautifully written and terribly sad.
Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-03-24 10:04 PM


This is way to good to be buried with only 1 response  
Denise
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3 posted 2000-03-24 11:11 PM


This is intense, Jackal. Well written!

Denise

wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2000-03-24 11:12 PM


this is very good yuh
tracie66
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5 posted 2000-03-25 05:28 PM


This is soo sad jackal
HUGS
tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Alwye
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In the space between moments
6 posted 2000-03-25 10:37 PM


Ah, I can relate to this extremely well.  Deeply sad and moving work.

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~



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