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I can't even look you in the eye

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SEA
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with you


0 posted 02-29-2000 01:09 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


* this is an old one, has nothing to do with now for me*

It is with a heavy heart
I say good-bye
I can't even
look you in the eye

I don't belong here
I'm not in love with you
it's not for you
that my heart is true

How can I lie here
sleeping in your bed
while all night~ sweet dreams of him
play in my head

So now I must go
I must say good-bye
I'm sorry~ I can't even
look you in the eye.
-SEA-


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jascanvey
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1 posted 02-29-2000 01:20 PM       View Profile for jascanvey   Email jascanvey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jascanvey

Aw, SEA, this is just so sad, so pleased it's not how you are feeling.
childomine
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2 posted 02-29-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

Sad but true.  It a difficult task to walk away from someone you know is in love with you.  Very good poem.
Parker
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3 posted 02-29-2000 10:31 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

SEA, This hit right on the mark for me, I've been there and know how hard it must have been for you. Loved it.

Parker
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4 posted 02-29-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Perhaps it's old
Truth it holds
But still a nice poem, well done


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