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But You Don't Know Me

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Marina
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0 posted 02-29-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina

But You Donít Know Me


My dreams at night
Wishing to feel you
Longing to hold you tight


Your kiss I crave to taste
Could you ever love me?
Or am I forever replaced


My truth never spoken
You with another
My heart always broken


Iím just a friend
Nothing more
All Iíve ever been


I love you silently
Deep inside me
Canít you see!
But you donít know meÖ.

Marina Feb 22/2000

© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-29-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is sadly beautiful, Marina...unrequited love is heartbreaking....

Denise
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2 posted 02-29-2000 11:48 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Marina, very beautiful, One of my favorites.

Parker
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3 posted 02-29-2000 12:02 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Mariana, this is a very nice poem.  I like the brevity of your style and the emotion.
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4 posted 02-29-2000 12:21 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Marina~ Good Grief, I know exactly how this feels. Ugh, my heart aches for you. This is a great poem.   -SEA
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5 posted 02-29-2000 01:02 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Yes, it is. . .I have to agree with Denise on this one. . .it's so hard to love someone and have them not even acknowledge your existence. . .

Beautiful words Marina. . . you always manage to say a lot with a little. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

JamesMichael
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6 posted 02-29-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A lovely poem Marina and lovely desires.  Keep searching because it takes two to tango.  James
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7 posted 02-29-2000 03:44 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I hear the echo of my own cries when I read this one, Marina... You've painted the pain beautifully... well done!
Marina
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8 posted 02-29-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Denise,James,and Danny: Thank you

Sea: I hope I haven't brought up any unhappy memories for you.

sven: Thank you..I knew I could count on you to make me feel better.

James and Suthern: thanks to you guys to.

Maybe one of you strong men can come to Canada and make me feel better...any volunteers??
Michael
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9 posted 03-01-2000 12:10 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Loving in the Dark.  It's a hard place to be in.  Step up and make him know you, Marina.
You have nothing to lose.


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Marina
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10 posted 03-01-2000 12:20 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Thank you Micheal for that good advice.  Maybe I should make myself known.

Marina
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11 posted 03-01-2000 04:55 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven:  What no painting or poems in this poem!!
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Marina- I've had this happen once too often...and I might have lost out on a great love...TELL HIM!!!! They say sometimes friends make the best lovers sweetie, so go for it!!! If he backs out then he doesn't deserve you anyway!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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Marina,
       maybe on my next trip to Canada. . . just tell me where you are. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marina
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14 posted 03-02-2000 10:10 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

devina you are right..sometimes friends do make the best lovers. If you cross the line however it can cause a lot of damage if both people don't feel the same.

So Sven when are you coming to Toronto?

Marina
 
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