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Corinne
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state of confusion


0 posted 02-29-2000 10:48 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne

Just a simple question with no easy answer,
a quest in need of quenching, no thirst greater,
searching for something, it never ceases,
tastes like desire, which only increases.

Something so familiar, nostalgic memories,
fragments of songs from forgotten melodies,
a whisper as you drift into sweet slumber,
of billowing sheets as she slips under.

Kiss that takes you down the tunnel of time,
a touch that builds sighs in the sweet sublime,
tears that gently fall onto parted lips,
and melts into reunion of swaying hips.

A breeze that caresses, begins to enthrall,
a gentle rain upon skin starts to fall,
a dream from which you never want to wake,
one where you give as much as you take.

2000 Corinne Bailey



[This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-29-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-29-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Corinne! As always!!

Denise
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 02-29-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Corinne...I love the way this flows off the tongue  
Toerag
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Ala bam a


3 posted 02-29-2000 11:05 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

May all your dreams be "suite".....nice job gal...
Marina
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4 posted 02-29-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is beautiful Corinne.  One of your best.

Marina
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on the threshold of a dream


5 posted 02-29-2000 11:29 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

And the sweetest dreams always seem to be betrayed by an alarm clock yanking us back to reality. *S* Well done!
Corinne
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6 posted 02-29-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thank you, Denise, Toe, Hoot, Marina and Suthern!

Corinne
Paul Hoekman
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7 posted 02-29-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

Hey Corrine,
It's been quite awhile since I've taken the time to check in here. I knew as my first stop checking out a Corrine original would
not disappoint. And I was right to count on you, Excellent work!     Paul
Parker
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... the old black rum


8 posted 02-29-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Corinne
This has such a sensual sweet message,
that I'm not sure how to respond.
It is a dream from which I would never want to wake.
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Don't shake me, oh... ok.

Parker  


[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-29-2000).]
Corinne
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9 posted 02-29-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Wow, thanks, Paul!  You are too kind!

Parker, I won't be the one to wake you!


Corinne
Parker
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... the old black rum


10 posted 02-29-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Ah, but Corinne maybe you would be the only one that could.

Parker

[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-01-2000).]
 
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