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In The Midst Of Our Storm
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In The Midst Of Our Storm |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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In The Midst Of Our Storm Outside the storm is churning As the cool winds blow Inside the fire’s burning Here in the candle’s glow Lay me down beside you Touch upon my skin Passion sparks inside you And warms you from within Let the lightning flash its light Outside the thunder roars We’ll make storms of our own tonight Here behind closed doors Take me to the height of love Take the words I speak While thunder crashes from above Take me to the peak Whisper words upon my ear As now the hard rains fall Quiet me and hush my fears By giving me your all Let the lightning flash its light Outside the thunder roars We’ll make storms of our own tonight Here behind closed doors Caught up in the fury The clouds are moving fast We’re not in any hurry Hoping that this storm will last Sheltered in your caring arms Protected from the storm Captivated in your charms I’m safe and oh so warm Let the lightning flash its light Outside the thunder roars We’ll make storms of our own tonight Here behind closed doors < !signature--> Have you ever noticed That the words... "Goodbye" "I'm sorry" "I love you" Are so easy to pronounce ...Yet so hard to say ~Javan [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
WOW!! Ruth, this is sooooo passionately beautiful!! I wish I had written this!  Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lady Hoot, I'm singing again, and I hope its rain alot tonight!!!!!!!! Beautiful poem Cerenity |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaa! This one burns with passion, my dear! Corinne |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Beautiful, Ruth! I wish I had someone to share a thunderstorm with. *sigh* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Denise, Corinne, Cerinity, and Tara....thank you all so much. I happen to love storms...the sound of the rain is so soothing and it's one time I actually sleep fairly sound  |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
WOW,WOW and WOW!!! This is  Beautifuly written here Hoot_Owl Thank you for the  Read. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Another great one, Hoot...I spent last two days of storm alone...sigh........... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ruth, this is wonderful. I loved the repetition of the lines... We’ll make storms of our own tonight Here behind closed doors Very deliciously passionate, dear poet. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie read my mind and my reaction to this poem. Keep them coming, Hoot liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Hoot Owl, a lyrical song of pleasure and passion, of which thunderstorms can accentuate so well. Beautiful work. ~ Claire |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW, Ruth, Now this is beautiful,so passionate, so HOT! Loved it my friend. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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wildbill58 Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 19 |
HOOT,I told you before,I could read your poems forever(or have you read them to me). |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ This is so softly, seductive. You've captured a special moment. Almost a whisper in the storm, and yet the thunder roars ! Stormy night ... oh, stormy night. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
MMmmmmm...dreamy and romantic! Loved this one, hoot...Hhmmm...a hoot owl in a thunderstorm? sounds like a sequel to me! But that is one for YOU to write! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ruffryder...glad you enjoyed it Beki...sigh, yes, I know how that is Martie and Elizabeth....thank you, I'm glad they added to and not distracted from it Meadowmuse...thanks DA...it really surprises me that everyone considers this so passionate...but thanks Wildbill...Oh, I think you'd get tired of it sooner or later Martie...I always look forward to your replies serenity...thank you so much |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, I live a life of torment....so where's the fun????  Just funning with you, Ruth. The poem is, as always, excellent. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Where cold winds blow and rain drop fall There can be a blanket the greatest gift of all Enchanting and so soooft Beautiful the poem you did Ruth Hugs and Love The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
great poem, its been a long time for either for me...the passion and the storm...I live in a double desert I guess |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Hoot... how I wish I had more than my cats to cuddle during the storms! *S* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Balladeer, corazon, Helmut and severn....thank you all |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hoot, very passionet, who needs a good book and a rainy day, this is a better activity. Parker |
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