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An Oldie, (and not necessarily a goodie)
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An Oldie, (and not necessarily a goodie) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
In writing this poem I'm feeling depleted, Hoping and praying it won't get deleted. It doesn't concern sex or passion or hate, Just making words rhyme as I try to relate. It has little meaning, just a word here and there, No thoughts or real meaning that I'm trying to share Just some "BS" and words that may rhyme, Just kinda writin' and wastin' my time. I guess I could say I'm doing something, But in reality, I'm writin' 'bout nothing. But my paragraphs show it's written in verse, If I put my mind to it, it'd probably be worse. So if you're reading this poem, act like you're doing something, And if someone asks what you're reading, Just say, "Oh, it's just nothing." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
It's never just nuthin' if it comes from you, Toe, no matter how hard you try, YOU come shinin' thru. Corinne |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Nothing at all that touch so many..hmmn, how do you do that?  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
An oldie AND a goodie! *S* And it's so good to see you posting... waste your time here more often! *G* |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I remember this one! This is cute!  Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And Toe... they'd take one look at the smile on my face and know that whatever I was reading was something special! *G* |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Why thank you gang, How yall been? Hope I can visit, Soon again. Yall take care And hope ya know, Yall are missed, By old man Toe! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTFLOL! Too cute! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Please stop in more often, as soon as you've got nothing to talk about. You know, that's one of my favorite topics of conversation. And how about some more poetry from your pen? I've got a feeling there's a wealth of subject matter stored in that mind of yours. I'd love to hear it. Liz |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
....and here he is, ladies and gentlemen...the Jerry Seinfeld of Passions Poetry!  Come on back when you can, Toe. You are greatly missed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Toe~ You're as welcome as the first fresh spring flowers. So glad to see you stop in for a visit. Wish you could stay longer. Ya'll come back now .. ya' heah? You are sorely missed. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I prefer to tell people I'm reading poetry written by my favorite Toe! Nice to see you here! And I disagree with 'deer..(come on back when you can!)..no WAY! Get your butt back here NOW! We're all in Toe-deficiency here! And there's no Toe-shot we can get to help!  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Great poem, old Toe - My reply will be coming soon, you rascally scalawag and devil. Its great seeing you post again. I'm looking forward to late March and early April, when I can "kill a few soldiers" with you. Take care, old man. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Remember the letter you once wrote to me Well guess what...if you leave I will do that exacta moa to thee So you have a choice to leave with nothing on your mind Or with more than a handful about your behind Chose wisely what will you do Perhaps you should keep writing about a toe in the shoe I surly will miss you a whole big bunch Make sure when you here to call me for lunch Somehow I think you got the hunch I will not weep or cry But I sure will miss toerag's lullaby Take care The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Ain' Miss Behavin' Junior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 25 |
Well now - It Ain' Nuthin' a'tall!!!..  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
If Toe says it's 'nuthin' it's nuthin' ! When my sweetie scowls cause I'm goo-goo over Toe. I just smile and sigh. I know that Toe is laughing and preparing for the next time he drops by. Sweetie asks me what I'm thinking, and starts to acting funny, when I just smile coquetishly and say ... 'Nuthin' honey ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL @ PDV... Ain't that the truth, though! LOL. Hurry back, Toe... no excuses! *G* |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
smiles from second in line good to see you |
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