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Dark Angel
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0 posted 02-29-2000 07:11 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


<- Back to Reality!


Silence overcomes my world
when you enter my thoughts.
Movement surrounding me
does no longer exist.

I see, hear and feel only you,
nothing else matters, as I
motion over to touch you
taking forever to reach you.

You are there right in front,
but I feel like I've been walking
for mile's, hands out stretched
reaching to be in your arms.

Finally, I touch precious you
and yet again, like a time capsule
I'm thrown into reality...
amongst human existence!


Dark Angel.
2000


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-29-2000 09:11 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely poem, Dark Angel! Sometimes reality can be a real bummer, heh? Well written, of course!  

Denise
WhtDove
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2 posted 02-29-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

DA this is one of your best I believe! Fantastic writing my dear. I love it! The last line, thrown back into reality...amongst human existance!  Excellent
Mystykyl
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3 posted 02-29-2000 12:49 PM       View Profile for Mystykyl   Email Mystykyl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mystykyl

I think that your poem is really great. Keep up the good work and the best of luck to you.
childomine
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4 posted 02-29-2000 01:52 PM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

I can say no more than - beautiful!!
Dark Angel
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5 posted 02-29-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Denise, you said it hon, yep a real bummer!!
Thanks for your lovely reply.
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Angel, You are so sweet with your replies, thank you so very much!! love ya!  
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Mystykyl, thank you so much and the best of luck to you too!  
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Childomine, thank you!  


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


serenity blaze
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6 posted 02-29-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Dark Angel--this is lovely and sad, but how
I did enjoy sharing your reverie...thanx.
HelmutB
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7 posted 02-29-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Such nice piece you did
I't sure got me thinking
Well done

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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8 posted 02-29-2000 09:10 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Where are you getting all this inspiration girl  
Poet deVine
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9 posted 03-01-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I can remember your first hesitant poems here...my how you've come alive in your work. This is another example of the talent you have! Good job.
devina
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10 posted 03-01-2000 12:55 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Reality comes much to quick for most of us!!! I can totally relate with this one!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Dark Angel
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11 posted 03-01-2000 08:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

So glad you enjoyed Serenity!   Thank you.
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Ruth, thank you my friend, for your lovely compliment.  
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Sharon, wow  I don't know what to say, thank you for your lovely compliment, it really means alot to me.  
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Devina, doesn't it such? thank you for your lovely comment.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-01-2000).]
Severn
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12 posted 03-06-2000 06:20 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Angel of Light - I do know that feeling, kind of frustrating, though precious.

Well done!

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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