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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2000-02-29 07:11 AM



<- Back to Reality!


Silence overcomes my world
when you enter my thoughts.
Movement surrounding me
does no longer exist.

I see, hear and feel only you,
nothing else matters, as I
motion over to touch you
taking forever to reach you.

You are there right in front,
but I feel like I've been walking
for mile's, hands out stretched
reaching to be in your arms.

Finally, I touch precious you
and yet again, like a time capsule
I'm thrown into reality...
amongst human existence!


Dark Angel.
2000


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-02-29 09:11 AM


Lovely poem, Dark Angel! Sometimes reality can be a real bummer, heh? Well written, of course!  

Denise

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-02-29 10:33 AM


DA this is one of your best I believe! Fantastic writing my dear. I love it! The last line, thrown back into reality...amongst human existance!  Excellent
Mystykyl
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 32

3 posted 2000-02-29 12:49 PM


I think that your poem is really great. Keep up the good work and the best of luck to you.
childomine
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since 2000-01-25
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st. petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-02-29 01:52 PM


I can say no more than - beautiful!!
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2000-02-29 05:42 PM


Denise, you said it hon, yep a real bummer!!
Thanks for your lovely reply.
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Angel, You are so sweet with your replies, thank you so very much!! love ya!  
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Mystykyl, thank you so much and the best of luck to you too!  
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Childomine, thank you!  


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-02-29 08:35 PM


Dark Angel--this is lovely and sad, but how
I did enjoy sharing your reverie...thanx.

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
7 posted 2000-02-29 09:08 PM


Such nice piece you did
I't sure got me thinking
Well done

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 2000-02-29 09:10 PM


Where are you getting all this inspiration girl  
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
9 posted 2000-03-01 12:38 PM


I can remember your first hesitant poems here...my how you've come alive in your work. This is another example of the talent you have! Good job.
devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
10 posted 2000-03-01 12:55 PM


Reality comes much to quick for most of us!!! I can totally relate with this one!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

11 posted 2000-03-01 08:48 AM


So glad you enjoyed Serenity!   Thank you.
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Ruth, thank you my friend, for your lovely compliment.  
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Sharon, wow  I don't know what to say, thank you for your lovely compliment, it really means alot to me.  
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Devina, doesn't it such? thank you for your lovely comment.   < !signature-->

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-01-2000).]

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

12 posted 2000-03-06 06:20 AM


Angel of Light - I do know that feeling, kind of frustrating, though precious.

Well done!

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

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