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Parker
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... the old black rum


0 posted 02-29-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

each and every time
----------------------------

are you just a dream
that enters my mind
a sweetness so sublime

when i'm rushing to and fro
you sit in the background
of the very front row

my lips have spoken for you
when you could not
and listened as you talked

in the darkness when I dream
are you there love...
are you there beneath the rain

your a shadow in my thoughts
i've touched you,  though i have not
and my finger tips have loved you
each and every time

James Parker Haley   Feb 29, 2000





[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-01-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 James Parker Haley - All Rights Reserved
Meadowmuse
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1 posted 02-29-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Parker, so delicate and tender and just beyond one's grasp...I know this feeling well, I think. This is beautifully written.

~ Claire
Marina
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2 posted 02-29-2000 01:17 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

James: Another perfect poem...I like the simple message you are able to communicate so easily.  I really like the second verse the best.

Marina
devina
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3 posted 02-29-2000 03:10 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is soft and gentle James...Quite easily sensual music to my ears sweetie!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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4 posted 02-29-2000 06:18 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Parker~
You say it just right.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Parker
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... the old black rum


5 posted 02-29-2000 09:38 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Ah, Clair you have read so perfectly, thank you.

Thanks Marina, it rushed into my mind and onto the paper.

A soft Thank you devina,  

Marge thank you as always.

Parker
Corinne
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6 posted 02-29-2000 09:58 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Parker,

you truly are a gentle, romantic poet...

Corinne


Janet Marie
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7 posted 02-29-2000 10:57 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is beautiful...i really enjoyed this...and Claire said it perfectly...
it is delicate...like a whisper...very nice work.jm

 You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name
And know my love and my desperation were one and the same...
Baby it's alright...
Take this pain and all this sadness
It's alright
Take this rain
You're going to be free...
Jackson Browne
*I love you baby*


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8 posted 02-29-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful poem, Parker!  

Denise
Parker
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9 posted 02-29-2000 11:14 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Corinne, I bow to a kindred spirit. This piece just wrote itself, I just lended my finger tips.

Janet Marie, thank you, it was just in my mind.

Denise, you snuck in there while I was replying... thank you.

Parker


[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-29-2000).]
Corazon
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10 posted 03-01-2000 10:17 AM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

this is beautiful, soft and straighforward, but reaching deep....great writing....and yep I know just what you mean when you say the piece just wrote itself...   that's how most of mine come out too
Parker
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... the old black rum


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Corazon, thank you, somehow its amazing how that happens.

Parker
Michael
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12 posted 03-01-2000 04:40 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wonderful poem, James.  Exquisite work.


Michael
Parker
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Thank you Michael, glad you liked it.

Parker
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... the old black rum


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OHhhh, defintely nice!  

 "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb
Gemini
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15 posted 03-01-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Gemini   Email Gemini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gemini

Haleyja: Oh to feel a dream like that!  Beautifully written.
Parker
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Rosalind, thanks glad you like...


Gemini, thank your it was an inspired dream.


Parker
Nurse Crachet
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17 posted 03-08-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Very nice poem, I liked the way it flowed so smoothly. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


18 posted 03-08-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

LOVE IT

A Romantic Heart
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19 posted 03-08-2000 12:48 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

What beautful, romantic poetry!!!!! my words cannot express how lovely and flowing this was!!!! I Love it!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


U K Hero
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20 posted 03-08-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

much enjoyed
poetFemmeFatale
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21 posted 03-08-2000 04:19 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Like you need anymore replies here, but I just couldn't read this and NOT reply!  This whispers to me in a voice so subtle, I tremble inside.  How do you do it?  "Are you there beneath the rain?"  What a line!  I am here beneath your rain, call me Jane...LOL       You've inspired me to write something along that line now!  (grabbing pencil!)  Thanks so much!  Be right back!  (dashing off - naked, into the rain!)  
Martie
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James--echos from all the above--just lovely!
Butterflies_dont_cry
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23 posted 03-08-2000 04:46 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Your words are like the the first snowflakes of the year, beautiful, delicate and cherished because they are not the only ones you will see but they are the ones most remembered and most enjoyed.  You have an amazing gift thank you for giving it to us to share.
Parker
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... the old black rum


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Nurse Crachet, Christopher, glad you liked.
thank you for reading.

A Romantic Heart, thank your.
U.K. Hero........ thank you too.

Girls running around naked in the rain, flashing my poem, what is the world coming to. Thanks poetFemmeFatale... hey it said you'd be back.

Martie, and I echo's my thanks thanks thanks
to you, sweet poet.

Butterflies_dont_cry, your name reminds me of a poem I wrote a long time ago....

Just for you and butterflies do cry........

Pink Butterfly    
-----------------                          
I remember from my earily teens        
The sadness of a lovely dream          
A girl I loved was soon to leave
and embark upon her destiny.
            
On this silvery moonlit night          
A misty glow just seem to light        
As we kissed our last goodbye          
She became a lovely Pink Butterfly.    


Parker........ I smile therefore I am.

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